【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.
In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference. 【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。话题是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并给了一些提示和注意事项：（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，要用上提示词，并适当发挥，要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，最后写出你的观点。注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意单词拼写，不要犯单词拼写错误，字数要符合要求。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；要点全面，结构连贯；语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，没有单词拼写错误，字数符合题目要求。
10．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达
我们在生活中总是面对着各种各样的压力，这会严重妨碍我们的学习和生活。某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。 1.与他人交流； 2.参加体育运动； 3.参加娱乐活动； 4.其它减压方式。
参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的 注意：
1.词数80-120左右；
2.文中不得出现真实人名及学校名； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.As for me.when I feel stressed,I usually communicate with my friends,parents or teachers.Sometimes I will do sports
with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so on.I go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,too.What's more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we live.We will be healthy and learn better . Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍自己面对着各种各样的压力是如何做的。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
11．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
你看过中央电视台董卿主持的节目《朗读者》吗？这是一档非常受欢迎的节目，让我们看到生活中读书的美好、读书的重要。请根据下面表格中所列的要点，以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一篇短文。
要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2．短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
3．词数80词左右；文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
【答案】Have you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.
Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy. Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading. Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.
Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life! 【解析】试题分析：本文是材料作文，也是话题作文，话题是“读书伴我成长”，以“Growing Up with Reading（读书伴我成长）”为题写一篇短文。根据内容提示可知本文使用的时态有一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲，本文给词的要点就是提纲，把要点中的重要短语翻译成英文：the beauty and the importance/ get knowledge/ open our minds/ makes us confident and happy/ proper books that can improve ourselves/ read in a right way/ think about more/ spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time/ develop a reading habit./ Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life!；（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。
点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。
12．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
随着互联网和手机终端发展，成瘾性网络游戏使一些中学生沉迷其中，影响了学习进步和身心健康。上周你们学校开展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many computer games ”为主题的专题讨论。请根据下表中的要点提示，写一篇短文，提出一些意见。
1.开班会课讨论网络游戏的优缺点； 学校要做些什么 2.开展有益的校外活动，如运动会，外出游玩等； 3.多与那些痴迷于游戏和聊天的学生进行交流, ……； 家长要做些什么 学生要做些什么 1.自己少玩手机，多陪伴，……； 2.密切配合学校，……； ……（至少两点） 注意 1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； 2.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数； 3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名；
Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many computer games .The students have different opinions.
【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many computer games. The students have different opinions.
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can communicate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.
When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.
As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must come first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies. 【解析】
这是一篇话题作文。给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们只要用英语正确的把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点就行。动笔前要真人阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当的发挥。根据题目要求，短文是一篇议论文，时态用一般现在时，人称为第三人称。写作中要注意适当使用连词，注意上下文紧密联系。符合逻辑关系。 高分句型【1】
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他们认为他们的学校可以开班会，帮助他们认识到互联网的利与弊。
动词不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.用作目的状语。 高分句型【2】
Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，学校应该定期举
办有益的校外活动。
此句是含有情态动词的被动语态。其构成为：情态动词+be+及物动词的过去分词。 高分句型【3】
Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 与学校紧密合作是家长帮助他们的另一重要途径。
动名词Working closely with schools作主语，视作单数，因此be动词用is。
13．（·北京中考模拟）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你是李华，在你的生活中一定有人给予你无私的爱和帮助。某英文网站正在开展题为 \征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？ 提示词语: mother, busy, take care of, cook, encourage, help, love, hard 提示问题:Who do you want to thank? Why do you want to thank him/her? What do you learn from him/her?
The person I want to thank
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【答案】The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.
【解析】这是一篇话题作文。要求以\为题写一篇短文，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？根据所给出的材料内容可知本文时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，注意不要出现语法错误。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
14．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
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