Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours, Tony
【解析】 【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。 【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。 【点睛】
文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。
6．（·济阳县第二实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。 内容包括：
1.完整叙述图片内容； 2.简要陈述个人观点。 要求：1.可进行适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
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【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are coming back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also comes up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens. 【解析】 【分析】
本文是一篇看图作文。 【详解】
根据题目要求“1.完整叙述图片内容； 2.简要陈述个人观点。”可知，文章用一般现在时。人称是第三人称和第一人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——描述图片内容。
按顺序分别描述四幅图的内容：男孩和女孩放学回家的路上，看到垃圾到处都是，女孩捡起垃圾放到了垃圾桶，男孩画了一个标志贴到垃圾桶上。 注意这一部分用用一般现在时。人称是第三人称。
第二部分：文章主体——呼吁大家保护环境。——城市是我家，保护靠大家。 第三部分：总结全文——做合格的市民。
7．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是Jack，中学英文报 WARM HEART专栏的编辑，近期你收到一封署名为 Asking的求助信，该同学在信中诉说了自己当前焦虑的情绪，请根据以下信息，给他写一封回信。 写作要点：
1. 表达你对他的理解并给予安慰。 2. 求助人焦虑情绪产生的原因。 （1）下周将要进行期末考试。
（2）尽管准备了很长时间，对成绩仍没有把握。 3. 为他如何消除考前焦虑提出具体建议并说明理由。 写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Hi, Asking,
I’m the editor of WARM HEART.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________ Editor, Jack
【答案】I’m the editor of WARM HEART.I hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.
First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.
What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.
Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself. 【解析】 【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对某位同学考前焦虑进行安慰，分析原因并给出消除焦虑的建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如hear from sb, get good grades,
as far as I’m concerned, the+比较级，the+比较级，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+状语放句首，用半倒装。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
8．（·山东中考模拟） 写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陈述自己的理由。 3. 提出至少2条建议。 【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let
her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
9．（·浙江中考模拟） 为响应我市全面创建国家文明城市的号召，丽水市中小学开展“文明城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy Life Ways of doing Your opinion ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,… ……（至少2条） 注意：
（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。 The Civilized City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
(英语)九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编技巧 阅读训练策略及练习题(含答案)含解析
