2020届新高考高三英语复习讲义(六) 书面表达 “概要写作”对应翻译题训练(C)
关于高考概要写作的指导与训练,我要求学生根据原文所划要点并结合原文理解,用中文概括出段落大意,然后用一句话翻译出来。说得简要一点,高考概要写作体现学生的中译英水平。所以,如果学生能理解原文,抓住原文要点并能用中文概括出大意,那么,问题的关键就是如何提升学生的翻译能力。
一、翻译原题
越来越多的中国人现在的确离不开手机。他们中的许多人,包括老年人,都使用手机应用程序保持联系并拓宽朋友圈。他们也用手机购物,查找信息,因为手机便于携带。此外,使用手机应用程序通信比传统电话便宜。然而,这种新趋势导致了人们在社交时过度依赖手机。事实上,一些年轻人已经变得十分上瘾,以至于忽略了与家人和朋友面对面的交流。
Today, more and more Chinese can't live without phones. Many of them, the old included, keep in touch and expand their circle of friends by mobile apps. They also use phones for shopping and searching information due to their portability. Besides, communication by mobile apps is cheaper than that by traditional phones. However, the new trend also leads to the over dependence on phones. In fact, some youngsters have become so addicted that they ignore face-to-face communication with their family members and friends.
二、单句翻译
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①现在,越来越多的中国人的确离不开手机。
Today, more and more Chinese can't live without phones.
②他们中的许多人,包括老年人,都使用手机应用程序保持联系并拓宽朋友圈。 Many of them, the old included, keep in touch and expand their circle of friends by mobile apps.
③他们也用手机购物,查找信息,因为手机便于携带。
They also use phones for shopping and searching information due to their portability.
④此外,使用手机应用程序通信比传统电话便宜。
Besides, communication by mobile apps is cheaper than that by traditional phones.
⑤然而,这种新趋势导致了人们在社交时过度依赖手机。
However, the new trend also leads to the over dependence on phones.
⑥事实上,一些年轻人已经变得十分上瘾,以至于忽略了与家人和朋友面对面的交流。
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In fact, some youngsters have become so addicted that they ignore face-to-face communication with their family members and friends.
三、你可以学到
1. include (doing) sth vt. 包括;包含 including作介词,后接介宾, =独立主格结构:名词或代词+included 你将需要各种技巧,包括领导能力和协商能力。
You'll need a variety of skills, including leadership and negotiating. You'll need a variety of skills, leadership and negotiating included. A variety of skills you'll need include leadership and negotiating.
2. 双重否定表肯定结构:表强烈肯定语气 We cannot succeed without your help. 没有你们的帮助,我们就不可能成功。
Today's young people can't live without smart phones. 当今年轻人的生活离不开手机。
It is not uncommon for students to make friends with their teachers. 学生与老师交朋友很常见(并不罕见)。 They never meet without quarrelling. 他们每次见面都吵架。
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I cannot/never see the film without being moved to tears. 每当我看这部电影,我都会感动得流泪。 There is no success without hardship. 没有磨难就没有胜利(不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹。)
3. become/beaddicted to (doing) sth对...上瘾;对...入迷 He has recently become addicted to (playing) computer games. 他最近玩电脑游戏有些走火入魔了。 Are you addicted to your smartphone? 你是不是对智能机上瘾了?
4. keep in touch (with sb) (与...)保持联络
Some students keep in touch with me all the time. 一些学生一直和我保持着联系。
I can keep in touch with friends and family by using email. 通过使用电子邮件我能与朋友和家人保持联系。
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