2020-2021年 【初中英语】 中考英语书面表达练习题 人教版(word)1

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A（n） toy gun I have

Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.

In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.

When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.

Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!

【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。 写作亮点：

这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。

6． 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。 提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare

提示问题： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? ● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? ● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday . . Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.

The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:

First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.

Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.

What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.

If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】 【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。 3.高分亮点：

短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。 句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。

7．为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。 内容提示：

1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口 2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。 要求：

1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.

After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

8．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。 你的烦恼 你的做法 个头不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己 父母不理解，朋友少 学会沟通，友善待人 学习压力大，课外活动少 ……（自主发挥，至少两点） 要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Hello everyone, Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.

My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.

I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies. That’s all. Thank you! 【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。 写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。 【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。

9．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计

划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。 写作内容：

1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。 2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。 3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。 写作要求：

1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。 3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my

parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.

I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday. 【解析】

试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。 考点：考查提纲作文。

10． 朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格; 2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事； 3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的 要求：

1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密 2. 词数80-100

3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My best friend

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.

I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.