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(2017·南昌十校二模)It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems.68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too.And a larger percentage lacks sleep.52% are short of physical exercise.42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers.Personally ,I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies.Without sound body,one can’t achieve anything.However,too much attention has been paid only on studies.As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life. 答案:
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(2017·济南模拟)Studying in the UK have been a good experience for me.When I first arrived, I find life very hard as I didn’t know anybody here,but I soon got to know other Chinese student at the university.Later I became interesting in communicating with people from various cultures,and I made fewer friends.
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(2017·山东六校联考)The day before Mother’s Day, everybody around me was talking about what was most suitable gift they would buy for their mothers.Buying flowers were what most students would do.However,I wanted to do something differently. As then I lived in school and couldn’t go back home on Mother’s Day, so I decided to call her and sent her my best wishes.I searched the Internet for suggestions, what were very useful ,and I read it carefully. When I called my mother,however,I had the feel that someone else’s words would have no meaning to her.So I gave in and just told my mother I loved her and thanked her to all she had done for me. 答案:
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(2017·太原二模)Here is a funny story.One day three mouses said proudly to each other that they each could drink more wine,so they decided to have a drinking contest. At last they both felt dizzy.One suggested,“Will anybody go to the wine cellar to fetch another bottle of wine?”The first stood up and down then fell to the ground.The other two laughed and said,“He was drinking and couldn’t walk.” The second stood up. He just made several steps and couldn’t help thrown up. The third laughed hardly and then it was their turn. He stood up and made one step, two steps... Nothing is wrong.He went straight to the wine cellar but took a bottle of wine.He stood there for while, turned back and said excitedly,“Ha ha, where is the cat now?” 答案:
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