2021高考英语读后续写素材积累（二）
一：语料积累
1．.Stanley got in line behind Zero（排队，动作描写）
2．\可笑的)!\喷出) saliva as he spoke（语言与动作描写）
3．Squid slid over to make room as Stanley sat down（动作描写）
4．He stopped writing as he became aware that somebody was reading over his shoulder（人物，动作描写）
5．Magnet helped Stanley to his feet(动作描写)
6．Stanley was half asleep as he got in line for breakfast, but the sight of MrSir awakened him（人物，动作描写）
7．Kate struggled to her feet（动作描写）
8．\（冲突，语言描写） 9．Sometimes she could hear Sam's voice echoing across the emptiness\onions.\（语言描写）
10．His knees crumpled(崩溃) beneath himHe was unconscious before he hit the ground（动作描写）
11．He kept an eye out for Zero, but Zero didn't come back（人物，动作描写） 12．人物情绪、心理描写
13．.He's just been in a bad mood ever since he quit smoking（情绪）
14．.Stanley was relieved to be left alone, but he was so thirsty he felt as if he would die if he didn't get something to drink soon.（心理活动）
15．The last thing he wanted to do after killing himself all day on the lake was to get in a fight with a boy called the Caveman（心理描写）
16．Stanley played the scene over and over again in his mind（心理描写）
17．Whatever pain he felt was being felt ten times worse by Derrick（痛苦，心理描写） 18．He didn't feel like going into details（心理描写） 19．He felt a jolt of astonishment(震惊)（心理） 20．My blood boiled（心理描写）
21．He tried to convince himself it wasn't impossible（心理描写）
22．What if Zero was still alive, desperately crawling across the dirt searching for water? （心理描写，动作描写）
23．
He tried to force the image out of his mind（心理描写）
二：文本训练
A few weeks before Thanksgiving one year, my then-husband and I decided to invite a guest over for the holiday. I called a senior center and they suggested Ilse, a woman I imagined would be quiet, soft-spoken. Unexpectedly, she was a stubborn 78-year-old gambler (赌徒).
On Thanksgiving, within minutes of arriving, Ilse threw her oversized purse on the kitchen counter and, with a wide smile, welcomed the glass of wine my husband offered. We felt as if she were an old friend after dining. Two weeks later, I invited her to lunch. The more time I spent with Ilse, the more she became like a grandma. She wasn’t afraid to share her opinion or to ask me when I was finally going to have children. “You’re not getting any younger,” she’d say.
I soon became her personal driver. And I noticed the more favors I agreed to do, the more she asked of me. Six months after we met, I called her only child, Ralph for help, but he claimed he didn’t have time. I doubted his “I’m too busy” excuse. A few months later, Ralph passed away. After the funeral, having realized Ilse was too upset to be left alone, I helped her hire a caregiver. She was like family to me, I felt responsible for her. And I was the only one left in her side. Each time I stopped by her apartment, Ilse seemed more disconnected than the time before. Late one afternoon, she called from the emergency room to tell me she had tripped over her coffee table. Using the spare key she’d insisted I make before, I searched her apartment and took the table away. The next morning, Ilse called to ask about her table. She was angry and told me how upset she was without it. Then she hung up on me. When Ilse called that evening to apologize, I told my husband to say I wasn’t home. I was still angry and hurt.
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Paragraph 1:
The following day, I returned her call but was unable to understand what she was saying. ___ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
The morning after Ilse’s death, I pulled her will out. ___________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文欣赏】 Paragraph 1:
The following day, I returned her call but was unable to understand what she was saying. I drove her to the emergency room, where the doctor confirmed she had suffered a mild stroke. During the next few days, I dropped by her apartment, but she was no longer the person I knew. At the weekend, I received an early-morning call from her caregiver. “Please come over. She’s passed away.” When I arrived, I saw Ilse lying on her bed, motionless, her eyes closed. I sat on the edge of the bed and held her hand, too shocked to cry.
Paragraph 2:
The morning after Ilse’s death, I pulled her will out. Ilse had insisted I take a copy of it a year earlier. I stopped reading when I saw my name. She had left me $50,000, which she had never mentioned before. If she had, I would have insisted she donate the money to charity. I knew I couldn’t spend the money on myself since I didn’t expect to ask anything in return for my pay. Without hesitation, I donated it to various families and charities with children to help them well educated in her name.
2021届高考英语读后续写素材积累(二)
