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连接词（如何语意连贯？）
原因 because since as due to his doctor's degree in that 所以/因此 so therefore
并列and aswellas or eitheror neithernor not only…but 递进also too more moreover as well after all besides
让步 as once though although even though while when despite in spite nevertheless 转折But however while still on the contrary
时序 first of all secondly then what’s more moreover in addition(另外，此外) Later last but not least by the way On the one hand on the other hand 强调 especially
总结 personally就我而言 to sum up总之
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四级作文用词中心
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A letter of suggestion
Write a letter to the president of your college or university about the problems in the library. 1. 图书馆存在很多问题，如藏书偏旧，数目较少，灯光昏暗等 2. 提出可行的建议
3. 期待图书馆出现新面貌
正文：
On Monday, March 11, 2013
Dear president,
My name is Simon who is a freshman in the Shanghai Maritime University(考试时候不能写学校的哟～).
Library is the third home to the most of the students next to the classrooms and dormitories. There are many benefits of reading regularly in the library. We acquire skills and inspiration, increase creativity as well as motivation here. Therefore, it is important for us to have a good library. However, some problems emerge in the process of using our library. On behalf of the students, I’d like to express our views:
First of all, opening hours are different from our study time, which has brought much inconvenience to us. The library is closed too early. So when we have spare time after class, it is often not accessible (我们有时间的时候图书馆不开 稍微把逻辑关系再表达清楚一点更好). Therefore,
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my suggestion is to extend the opening time. Secondly, there are too many outdated books. Specially, the periodicals in the library can't keep up with trends. Thirdly, the library is in a poor study condition, for example the lighting is dingy. Worse still, something is always wrong with computers, which exhausts our patience. For the reasons mentioned above, there are some suggestions for reference .I suggest the headset is provided. What’s more, it is necessary to purchase more books and academic journals, for instance, magazines, periodicals and literature books. Last but not least, we hope that better lighting system will be provided, and the library system will be updated and keyboards will be replaced.
I believe that our library will have a new look in the near future.
Sincerely yours
Simon
整个文章写得很好，结构、用词、语法都很好，现在这个水平13分以上应该没什么问题。
如果想进一步完善，包括之后要考雅思的话，有几个小问题再注意一下： 1。动词使用，什么时候是谓语，什么时候用 ing, 单复数等。 2。名词的单复数细节再注意）
3。文章段落太多 啦，问题可以合并，建议可以合并。3－4段是最清晰的结构了。
希望你再接再厉争取拿个高分喔！
指导老师: 郭蕾 刘如虹
Recently, a survey has been conducted among the students in grade three about what
they will do during the three month holiday after the College Entrance Exam.
Students have different decisions. About 45% of the students intend to rest at home. They want to relax thoroughly and get ready for college life. While 28% of them prefer to attend English classes .Meanwhile, 15% of them choose to travel outside. And the rest 12% say they’d like to do other things. After all, it’s really difficult to get such a long holiday again after they become college students.
Personally, I will be a little sad if I get away from my parents. So I’d like to stay at home and spend more time with my family.
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要降低风险 少蒙B多蒙C 反选大多BCD 无四个连选 上下删同 听力上下删同 趁听力读出声
英语阅读 龙拳爆发，定首句，画出处与细节。 重点放在完形填空上
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