小升初英语作文 小学英语作文指导与欣赏-节假日旅行或回忆篇
A bad cold
I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a
fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold! I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school.
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写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了生病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复并且去上学的愿望。
时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数，动词别忘了第三人称单数形式。
句型：要用feel 加形容词，和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have+表示的疾病的单词。 注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache, hurt和sore。不要只用一个单词，以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写得病的情况。常见病句：My nose is hurt。因为be后面要加形容词，而hurt是动词，因此应使用sore；东西放在床上要用on the bed。生病，是卧床不起，应该说stay in bed。表示吃药时，通过用take some medicine，不用eat。 词汇量要控制在40~60之间。
1 小升初英语作文 A farewell party
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class There have a farewell party.
They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performances at the party. Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing. Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts for her. And they will take a picture together.
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写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目，以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。
时态：这篇习作可采用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时三种时态来写。 句型：①一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他.
来源学_科_网②现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他.
③一般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他.
注意：由于本文章中所涉及的时态比较多，所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数形式。
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小升初英语作文 In the park
It is sunny today. My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming on the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a bad mouse.
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写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动，还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。
时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态。 句型：①一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他.
②现在进行时：（1）What +be (am,is,are)+主语+动词-ing+其他?
（2）主语+be(am,is,are)+动词-ing+其他.
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小升初英语作文 Let’s have a nice day
It’s Sunday tomorrow. I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning.We are going to look for some good books. We all like reading books. We are going to eat lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables. After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play in it. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake. Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5 p.m. 【要领点评】
怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得充实，二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了，上午去书店看书、买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，文笔也很优美。更多内容请关注微信公众号：小学英语
小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等，使文章有血有肉。要确定好是写过去发生的事情，还是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多用“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要，那就是故事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。
My days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade Five. I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday
4 小升初英语作文 to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on Sunday, and I like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。更多内容请关注微信公众号：小学英语
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。
A busy weekend
I’m going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework. On Saturday afternoon, I am going to play football. On Sunday morning, I am going to buy a book. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents.
My weekend plan
I’m going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday, I’m going to visit my grandparents with father and mother. I will help them to clean their rooms. We are going to have lunch together. On Sunday, I am going to do my homework in the morning. In the afternoon, I’m going to play football with friends.
My weekend plan
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小升初小学英语作文指导与欣赏节假日旅行或回忆篇
