Book 6 Unit 5 The power of nature
Period 7 Writing
学习目标
1. 掌握描写性文章的写法和常用句型。 2.运用所学知识写一篇描写性文章。
自主合作探究
如何写描写性文章
描写性文章是一种常用文体，它用准确、生动、形象的语言刻画描述对象的特点，使读者对所描写的事物能获得如见其形、如闻其声、如尝其味、如临其境的真实感。在进行这种文体的写作时要注意下面几点：
1．准确选择描写角度
根据实际需要选用合适的人称进行描写。因为不同的人称会影响写作内容的选择和写作目的的定位。
2．灵活安排描写次序
灵活地安排好描写的顺序，例如按照时间顺序、空间顺序或逻辑顺序等。 3．恰当运用描写手法
描写时应恰当地运用多样的表现手法,不要只是平铺直叙。具体、准确、生动、形象是描写文的语言特点，应根据需要恰当地运用比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法进行描写。
4．抓取典型特征
在描写中应注意抓住有代表性的细节精心选材，要抓住特征，使重点突出、详略得当，一定要避免面面俱到的错误做法，尽可能在较小的篇幅中给读者留下深刻的印象。
5．适当渗透情感
在描述的时候恰当融入对所描写对象的主观感受可以引起读者的共鸣，从而起到画龙点睛、升华主题的作用。 【常用句式】
① ...lie in/on/to the east/west/north/south of... ② Located in...，...covers an area of... ③ Situated in...，...is paradise for...
④ ...is located/situated in/to/on...，covering an area of... ⑤ ...has become the most popular tourist attraction for... ⑥ ...be known/famous for/as...
⑦ It has a population of...，with a history of...
⑧ The weather here gets neither too cold nor too hot all the year around. ⑨ If you come to...for a visit，you will have a chance to enjoy... ⑩ A trip to...will give you a glimpse of the happy lifestyle of... ? ...，known as...，attracts visitors from all over the world. ? A walk around...is a feast for your eyes.
习作练习
Use the notes below to write a paragraph about the hot pools at Changbaishan. Begin like this：
“When you have finished your visit to Tianchi，don't rush away. There are plenty of other things to see and do in Changbaishan. For example，you can relax in the nearby hot springs...”
Hot springs.
1)pools heated by hot water out of the ground 2)water heated by boiling rocks in the ground
3)a group of springs in an area of 1,000 square metres
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4)some pools very hot(over 60 ℃)but others very pleasant for bathing 5)bathing supposed to be good for health [思路点拨]
本篇作文可以从以下三个方面入手。一、先概述长白山的位置和特色；二、详细介绍温泉的特点；三、归纳全文，点出天池温泉的魅力。 [词汇热身]
1．位于 __ _ 2．珍贵的 ____________ 3．占地…… ____________ 4．蜿蜒前进 _______________ 5．在……洗澡 __________ 6．吸引 ____________________ 7．变化 ________________ [句式温习]
1．位于吉林省南部，长白山是中国自然保护区之一。
Jilin Province，Changbaishan is one of China's nature preservation zones. 2．白头山的天池位于火山口处，里边碧水盈盈。 Tianchi on the White-head Mountain is the crater of volcano， .
3．在白头山的北侧，有一组占地1000多平米的温泉。 At the north side of the White-head Mountain，there is a group of hot springs . 4．在温泉里洗澡应该对身体有好处。
____ the hot springs ___________ be good for health. [连句成篇]
_________________
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