2021届新高考英语二轮复习练习：写作规范练(三) (含解析)

写作规范练(三)

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Ⅰ.短文改错 (2020·保定四月检测)With a history of more than 2，000 years，the Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders in the world.Some of it sections are now in ruins，and some have been disappeared.Badaling is the largest section which remains.Sit on the steep mountains，Badaling is popular known as “the key to the northern gate”．It attract a large number of visitors every year.A good many foreign leader will climb it when coming China.Since 1957，Badaling had received over 400 world leaders and about 150 million visitors at home or abroad.Now it is regarded as the first brand of China's tourism industry.

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Ⅱ.书面表达

近年来，很多父母选择陪伴孩子读书学习，陪读已成为一种普遍现象。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：

1．简要描述陪读现象；

2．分析父母陪读的原因(2至3个)； 3．发表你对此的看法。 注意：词数100左右。

Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?

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Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying

at School?

In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern.

These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus.Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children.Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids.Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids' academic performance.

Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent.Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future.

Trust leads to independence.So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development.