高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--做人道理（不轻易评判他人)
板块一--例文(不轻易评判他人）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Once there was a ship travelling on the tough sea and on the ship there was a pair of couple. All of a sudden, the ship met with an accident and the couple had no choice but to run to the life boat without delay. After reaching there, they realized that there was space only for one person. At that very moment, the husband pushed his wife behind him and jumped onto the lifeboat himself, leaving his wife standing on the sinking ship, shouting something desperately to her husband eyes filled with tears.”
The teacher stopped her story-telling and asked her students, “Guys, guess what it was that she shouted.”
Most students answered. “I hate you!”
After listening to all this reply, the teacher glanced through the whole class again and noticed that there was a boy sitting silently throughout. Then she asked him the same question.
The boy answered, “I believe she would have shouted-Take care of our child.”
Listening to his remarks, the teacher was surprised and asked the boy doubtfully. “Have you heard of this story before?”
Shaking his head, the boy said softly and sadly, “No, I haven’t. But that’s what my mother said to my father before she died of a deadly disease.”
Moved and feeling sad, the teacher replied. “Your answer is absolutely right!”
Then she continued, “Let’s take up the story. The ship sank eventually and the husband went home and brought up their daughter alone. Many years later after the death of the man, their daughter was tidying up all his belongings when she found his diary. In his diary she found that when her parents were on the ship, her mother had already been diagnosed (诊断) with advanced illness and at the critical moment, the father rushed to the only chance of survival.” 注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In his diary, the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their
daughter he had to live.
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The story was finished and the class was silent.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version:
In his diary, the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live. Without him, their baby daughter would become an orphan. After drowning himself in sorrow for a short time, he uplifted himself and learned how to raise baby. Whenever faced with hardships, he would inspire himself with his wife’ words—“Take care of our child.” Seeing the little girl grow into a sunny, pretty girl with double love from both parents, the man knew he made it to keep his promise.
The story was finished and the class was silent. Nobody talked or laughed as usual. Instead, it seemed that every student was lost in deep thought, tasting the moving life story. The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting on their replies and that they had understood the moral of the story. Of the Good and Evil in this world, there are hidden secrets behind them. So we should not really focus on the surface and judge anyone without understanding them first. Put yourself in others’ shoes and then you can really understand their behavior. 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲述了老师在课堂上给学生们讲了一个故事：故事的大致内容是一对夫妇在海上遇到事故，但是救生艇只能容纳一个人，最后，丈夫推着身后的妻子，自己跳上了救生艇，留下妻子站在正在下沉的船上，绝望地对着
丈夫喊着什么。老师让学生猜想妻子说了什么，大多数学生的回答是“我恨你！”，但是一位学生却回答说妻子让丈夫照顾好孩子。老师继续说故事，多年以后，他们的女儿在整理遗物时发现了父亲的日记，原来母亲已经被诊断出病情严重，在关键时刻，父亲冲向了唯一的生存机会。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：在他的日记中，他提到他希望和妻子一起沉入大海，但为了他们的女儿，他必须活下去。接下来可以写没有他，他们的宝贝女儿会变成孤儿。在短暂的悲伤之后，他提升了自己，学会了如何抚养孩子。每当遇到困难时，他都会用妻子的话激励自己——“照顾好我们的孩子。”看着小女孩成长为一个阳光明媚、漂亮可爱、受到父母双爱的女孩，这个男人知道他这样做是为了履行自己的诺言。第二段的开头是：故事讲完了，全班安静下来。接下来可以写没有人像往常一样说话或大笑。相反，每个学生似乎都陷入了沉思，品味着动人的人生故事。老师确信学生们正在反思他们的回答，并且他们已经理解了这个故事的寓意。这个世界上的善与恶，背后都隐藏着秘密。所以我们不应该只关注表面，在不了解任何人之前就对他们进行评判。设身处地为别人着想，你就能真正理解他们的行为。
【点睛】续写内容得当，使用了固定短语和高分句型。如：be faced with；take care of；make it；keep one’s promise；reflect on；focus on；put oneself in others’ shoes等固定短语。①Seeing the little girl grow into a sunny, pretty girl with double love from both parents, the man knew he made it to keep his promise.中使用了现在分词seeing作状语；②The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting on their replies and that they had understood the moral of the story.中that引导的是宾语从句。
版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦
表人物动作或心理活动
1. 给某人造成负担：impose a heavy burden on sb. 2. 步态优美地走：walk grarefully
3. 不顾对...的忧虑：regardless of concerns over 4. 互相谅解，相互理解：mutual understanding 5. 鼓起勇气：muster up courage
6. 首次露面：make one's first appearance
7. 面对斗争与改变：in the face of struggle and change
8. 服从志愿者组织的指挥：follow orders from the voluntary organization 9. 没有履行职责:fail to carry out one ’ s duties 10. 有不端行为：display unacceptable behavior
11. 损害高中生形象：damage the image of high school students
高三英语新题型读后续写不同主题分析--做人道理(不轻易评判他人)
