九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题含解析
一、英语书面表达
1. 如今,很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车(bike-sharing),它因环保、便捷而备受青睐,但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以"Bike-sharing"为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示:
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure(减缓交通压力) Take exercise… Advantages Problems Advice Throw away, damage(毁损), be stolen… Civilized(文明的), follow the rules, take good care of… 注意:
1. 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名;
3. 词数:80-100(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.(优势) However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(难题)
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】(建议) 【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富,表达了所有要点,语言表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语,为文章增色不少,.如: It's known that it has many advantages.,First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。 【点睛】
本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题,根据表格的内容提示,写一篇短文,表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时,考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点:首先,阐述共享单车的优点;其次,列举共享单车带来的问题;最后,根据问题给出个人建议。
2.假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息,给 David写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。 比例 50% 30% 20% 你的计划 计划 去国内外旅游 多读一些书 参加社会实践 ? (至少一个) 原因 1.放松;2.欣赏美景 1.增长知识;2.培养兴趣 1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友 ?(请你补充)
注意:
(1)邮件应包含所有要点
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数); (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分 注:社会实践 social practice activities Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of
the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.书面表达 我的英语学习
初中即将毕业,你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法,请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法,根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文, 多听 多说 多读书 语法规则 写作 其他 听收音机,听音乐等,可以放松...... 运用英语,增强能力与信心...... 开阔视野,了解英语文化...... 更好地理解与运用...... 写写日常生活...... ...... 要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范; 2.必须包含表格中所有内容,并作适当发挥 3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; 4.词数80-100。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如look back,listen to the radio,a good way to learn English,relax ourselves,communicate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition,in a word等。而感叹句How time flies!,倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
4.书面表达
每年的4月23日是世界读书日,这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书,促成长”活动,请你根据这项活动的主题,向全校同学发出倡议。
1. 获取知识,开阔视野 读书的意义 2. 使人愉悦,益于学习 3. ……(自由发挥) 现状 倡议 1. 作业多,无良好读书习惯 2. 不知道读什么书,不会选择 ……(至少两点) 注意:1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2. 短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear classmates,
Reading is very important in our daily life.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s start reading now!
【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life.
First of all,reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books.It can also help to open up a whole new world to us.Second,reading will/can make us clever and happy.It is good for our study and it can help us grow up.Third,reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful.
However,there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet.
In my opinion,our school can have a\.Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let's start reading now!
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so much,spend too much time doing,search the Internet,in my opinion,as a result等。同时First of all,/ Second,/ Third等时间副词和However/ Moreover / As a result等结构副词的运用,既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明,还丰富了习作内容,使表达多样,是本文的最大亮点。
点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。