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专题28 书面表达（开放类）
2024年高考试题
1.【2024·全国I】假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括: 1.写信目的: 2.个人优势: 3.能做的事情。 注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯； 3.结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】I'm LiHua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job.
First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least,through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在式。 2.谋篇布局
书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段写个人优势和能做的事,最后一段总结。
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3.关键词
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer,a Chinese Painting Exhibition,local city,advantages,a good command of,beneficial for,familiarity with,appreciate ,take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误,并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇,如First of all, Besides, to begin with,moreover,as for me,Last but not least,等,使全文衔接自然,语义流畅。
本文首段开门见山,表达了写信的目的；第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情,an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外,还使用了高级句式结构,如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration条件状语从句。
无论是在学校还是今后读大学再到走上工作岗位,写好一份申请都是你必不可少的一项技能。这种形式的写作,学生需结合自身优势,
考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)提出写信的目的——申请做这个志愿者；(2)提出个人优势；(3)表达出自己能做的事情；2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager studying in London. Learning that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditional painting , I am writing to apply for it.
I have some advantages for the job. First of all, having lived in China for years and learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of both English and Chinese, which is beneficial when introducing Chinese paintings to foreign friends. Besides, because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least, through my efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England.
I would appreciate it if this wonderful chance would be offered to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, LiHua
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2.【2024·全国II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:
1.比赛信息； 2.赛前准备； 3.表达期待。 注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【解析】本文要求给你的队友Chris写一封邮件,告知他关于近期参加排球比赛的情况。邮件的主要内容包括：1. 比赛信息；2. 赛前准备；3. 表达期待。
1.考生在写作的时候,要注意：由于书面表达开放性很强,只为考生提供了一个笼统的写作提纲,因此首先,要在邮件的开始点明排球比赛的具体信息,可以自己增加一些内容等。其次,写明比赛的赛前准备等。另外,在邮件中最后表达自己的期望等。
2.时态：以一般将来时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
同时要灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。 【答案】 Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the morning of July 8th. We will play against a team from ChaoYang High school. For good performance in the match, we must get fully prepared and practice hard. So starting morning, we all need to train for two hours after school every day. In addition, we should avoid getting hurt during the training and have a healthy diet to keep fit.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we have every hope of beating another team. Let’s try hard together.
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Sincerely, Li Hua
3.【2024·全国III】假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括: 1.时间； 2.活动安排； 3.欢迎他表演节目。 注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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随着网络的发展,写电子邮件是中学生经常与朋友沟通的一种方式,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉。
考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)音乐节的时间(2)活动的安排(3)欢迎朋友表演一个节目 2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。 【答案】 Dear Alien,
I am writing to invite you to attend the Music Festival to be held from 8：00 a. m .to 5：00 p.m. next Sunday in my school.
In order to enrich our after-class life, our school is to organize this festival, which is intended to promote Chinese traditional folk music as well as enjoy foreign ones. Not only will you appreciate wonderful folk music items like performances of Erhu and Guzheng, but also you can give a performance to us in person. I hope you can play the piano or sing an English song for us.
Looking forward to your coming. I promise it will be a feast for your eyes and ears. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
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4.【2024·浙江】假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3.临别祝愿。 注意:
1.词数80左右；
2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【解析】本文是邮件,主题是感谢信,根据写作提示,考生应用英语给Alex写一封邮件,感谢他的帮助。写作内容主要包括三项：1．表达感谢；2．回顾Alex的帮助；3．临别祝愿。这封邮件由三段组成：第一段陈述写信的目的；第二段陈述写信的理由；最后一段为结束语。 【答案】 Dear Alex,
Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.
I still remember what you have devoted to improve my oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever!
Yours, Li Hua
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2024年高考英语精选考点突破28 书面表达(开放类)(教师版)试题集
