教学内容 教 学 目 标 书面表达技巧 ? 牢记一个中心，两个基本点 书面表达讲解 书面表达技巧+例题讲解 牢记一个中心：书面表达即口头表达的书面化，是试题规定的笔头交际任务—考生根据提示，有效运用所学语言知识，清晰、连贯地传递信息，表达意思。 两个基本点，即要点都说到了没有？内容都说对了没有？ ? 四个步骤 Step 1 : 仔细审题定要点； Step 2 : 正确表达选句型； 1) 简单句的六种基本结构 2) 陈述句（Declarative Sentence），疑问句（Interrogative Sentence）， 祁使句（Imperative Sentence），感叹句（Exclamatory Sentence） Step 3 : 拓展关联加细节Give more relevant information ； Step 4 ：规范誊写增亮点——短语；复句；非谓语动词形式 书面表达讲解 四步搞定英语书面表达示例（一） 2017年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语（新课标I）书面表达 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Step 1 : 仔细审题定要点： 1) 告知计划 2) 时间 3) 地点 4) 学习唐诗 5) 课前准备6) 了解唐朝的历史 Step 2 : 正确表达选句型 1) 告知计划 I tell you the plan . 2) 时间 8 am – 10 am 1/8 3) 地点 in the open air / in the People’s Park 4) 学习唐诗 we learn Tang poems. 5) 课前准备 You get prepared before class / in advance. 6) 了解唐朝的历史 You learn / know about the history of the Tang Dynasty. Step 3: 拓展关联加细节 学习唐诗→ 兴趣 ；地点→原因；了解唐朝的历史→好处 Step 4：规范誊写增亮点 示例（一）答案A： Dear Leslie, I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems. Now I am writing to tell you the plan for the next class. Actually I am very fond of poems.① I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you. ②We are to meet on Sunday morning in the people’s park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. We will learn from 8 am to 10 am .Besides ,I advise you to go to the bookstore to borrow a history book and learn the history of The Tang Dynasty in advance，which can help you better understand the poems to be learned . If you have any questions, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【一句多译】 ①表达方式一： I consider it quite interesting to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you . 表达方式二： I am sure it is worthwhile to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you . ②表达方式一： We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People’s Park ,where the air is fresh and the scenery is fantastic. 表达方式二：We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People’s Park because it is a good place to study in . 示例（一）答案B： Dear Leslie, I am writing to inform you of the following class. What surprised me is that you are keen on Chinese poetry. Tomorrow morning, I decide to teach you Tang poems. As you know, whether young or old in China, we all like poems, such as Quiet Night Thoughts In my opinion , we had better learn poems in the People’s Park , which is a good place to study in . Let us meet at 8 am and we are to learn until 10 am. By the way, it is necessary for you to borrow one or two books from the school’ library and know something about the
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history of the Tang Dynasty so that we can communicate better. If you need any help, don’t hesitate to call me . Yours Li Hua 示例（一）答案 C Hi Leslie, I'm writing to tell you about the Chinese class next week. Let's meet at two Tuesday afternoon at the coffee shop near my school again. I plan to help you study some poems of the Tang dynasty which is an important part of Chinese civilization. Many of the Tang poems have greatly influenced Chinese literature. And we learned them at a young age. I’ll help you read and understand the selected poems before we have a discussion of them. To make it easier, I suggest you study and get some knowledge of the Tang dynasty in advance. See you then! Best, Li Hua 四步搞定英语书面表达示例（二） 假如你是李华，你的朋友Smith发来邮件说他即将从澳大利亚悉尼探亲归来，询问是否需要从悉尼帮你买些东西，请你给他回复一封电子邮件。要点如下： 1. 向Smith的父母表示问候； 2. 表示谢意； 3. 希望购买的物品。 注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透露考生本人所在学校及真实个人信息。 Dear Smith, Yours, Li Hua Step 1 : 仔细审题定要点： 1) 归来 2) 探亲3) 问候 4) 谢意 5) 购买的物品 Step 2 : 正确表达选句型 1) 你即将归来 You will come back / return / You are coming back 2) 你探亲 You see / visit / get together with / reunite with your parents 3) 问候 Give /send my best wishes /regards / love to your parents. Remember me to your parents
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4) 谢意 Thank you for … It is very kind of you … I don’t know how to express my appreciation / gratitude. I am grateful /thankful to you for … I appreciate your help more than I can say . I’d appreciate it if … 5) 购买的物品 a guidebook / a travel booklet /brochure ;an English dictionary ; souvenirs Step 3: 拓展关联加细节Give more relevant information 探亲→愉快 → 分享 物品→受益 Step 4 ：规范誊写增亮点 示例（二）答案A Dear Smith, Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney. Here I’d like to send my best regards to your parents. I’m sure you must have had a good time with your family. I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later. It’s considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me. I don’t know how to express my appreciation if you could buy me a travel booklet for Sydney. I believe I will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet. I have also prepared a special gift for you. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Hua 示例（二）答案B Dear Smith, Pleased to know that you are returning to China after reuniting with your parents in Sydney. Please remember me to your parents. I’m sure you must have had fun with your family. I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later. It’s thoughtful of you to do some overseas purchasing for me. I’d appreciate it if you could buy me an English dictionary，which will contribute to improvement of my English study . I have also prepared a special gift for you. Looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible Yours, Li Hua
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书信常用句型 1、投诉信 投诉信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied with your … 投诉信的结尾常用句式和套话 I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of … 2、询问信 询问信的开头常用句式和套话 I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning … I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding … 询问信的结尾常用句式和套话 Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you. 3、请求信 请求信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to seek for your assistance in … 请求信的结尾常用句式和套话 I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter. 4、道歉信 道歉信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to apologize for … I am writing to say sorry for … 道歉信的结尾常用句式和套话 I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 5、感谢信 感谢信的开头常用句式和套话 I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for … 感谢信的结尾常用句式和套话 I must thank you again for your generous help. 6、建议信 建议信的开头常用句式和套话
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高三英语一轮复习--高中英语专题之书信写作教案
