续写必备——与情感和动作有关的表达
害怕
① He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. ② Fear slowly creeps （爬，蔓延）upon her. ③ She was struck with horror when... ④ She was choked by fear.
⑤ Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied. ⑥ A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.
⑦ Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated ['s?f?keitid] （窒息）. ⑧ She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles（如坐针毡）. ⑨ He froze in horror.
感动&羞愧
① Touched deeply/immensely, we…
② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude. ③ With tears streaming down her face, she... ④ Moved to tears, she failed to utter a word. ⑤ I felt my face burning with shame.
⑥ I was overcome by a wave of guilt and words failed to express my regret. 愤怒
① I was seized by anger. ② He was fuming [fjumi?] （冒烟的 ）with rage.
③ His anger boiled over（沸溢 ；(情绪) 失去控制 ）. ④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage（愤怒 ）. ⑤ He was breathing fire and fury（激怒的感情） ['fj??r?] . ⑥ His voice trembled with anger. ⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger. ⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.
⑨ He flared up （发怒；爆发 ）at the word. ⑩ His face clouded with anger.
⑨ They sat there with glum [gl?m]（闷闷不乐的 ）looks on their faces. ⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.
? He brimmed over with （满溢；充满）sorrow when... ? They were immersed in（沉浸于）sorrow. ? These days he was in low spirits. 喜乐
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond. ② A simile of understanding flashed across his face.
③ A ripple [‘r?pl] （涟漪 ）of excitement ran through them. ④ Laughter lingered around (萦绕 ) the room. ⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
⑥ A wild gaiety ['ge??t?] （快乐） took hold of her.
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. ⑧ I was wild with joy/ on the top of the world.
心理动词
? These events constantly remind me of my father’s absence.
? I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile. ? Most days I hope that maybe he will turn up at my doorstep one day.
? At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be sentenced to death for killing people. ? He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.
? So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrong person, and he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. ? I focused my thoughts on every part of myself.
? We nodded our heads in agreement, understanding each other. ? Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father by firing it. ? I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.
? I was afraid to go to sleep, for fear that I would wake up the way I had been before. ? Then I tried to figure out what I should do. Follow my friend to the hospital? ? There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself. ? All I could do at the hospital, I decided, was to get in the way.
? As I started my car, I realized that my friend had left his truck and keys at the courts. ? From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life isn’t the money you make. ? I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life. ? He felt he could not continue and sat down on the lawn.
? At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled his mind with a great, bright light. ? Tom thought for a moment, was about to agree; but he changed his mind.
手的动词
? Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awkward way. ? Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms. ? The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly .
? The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand. ? Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
? He parked down the street from Bobby’s house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement. ? The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben's hands. ? Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.
? Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell. ? She didn’t say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly. ? As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were. ? He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything particular you want?”
? She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa Clause.” ? He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.
? She handed the napkin to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it. ? Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins. ? “I'm Nancy Drew,” she said, holding out her hand.
? The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward. ? He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.
? Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall. ? Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.
脚的动词
? Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.
? Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me. ? She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.
? Tom ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.
? The shadows were lengthening when Tom arrived at（动作） the factory. ? Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop. ? Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.
? Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family. ? Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears. ? And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.
? Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables. ? I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room. ? I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted. ? The elderly man fled away with great panic.
? The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.
眼的动词
? We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance/glimpse of his face. ? Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell. ? Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes. ? The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying to make a conversation. ? I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless. ? Then I crept downstairs and examined the tags attached to each of the packages. ? Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party. ? When he finished he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out the window.
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