Part B
审题:柱状图(动态图)、主题翻译(就业work、升学further study、创业 start business、毕业去向 choices of graduates) 框架
数据分析
原因分析(市场需求小、观念转变、政策) 预测 【参考范文】
As is vividly revealed in the bar chart,some noticeable changes have taken place in terms of choices of graduates after graduation from 2013 to 2018 in a certain college. According to the figures provided by the graph, one can see 68.1 % of graduates chose to work in 2013, while the figure decreased to 60.7% in 2018. The figure of further study showed an upward trend, increasing from 26.3% to 34.0%. The percent of starting business rose from 1.3% to 2.6%.
It is of no difficulty to come up with some possible factors for these situation. First and foremost, the decreasing number of graduates choosing to work may stem from the decreasing demand of employment in the market. Second, the shift in graduates’ conception on job and study produces a contributing effect upon the current condition, because the increasing number of graduates want to study further after graduation. Last but not least, we must admit that this tendency also has a lot to do with the positive guidance of certain policies ,which encourages creating business.
Taking into account what has been argued so far, we can safely come to the conclusion that this situation is normal and acceptable. There is every reason to believe that this condition will go on in the near future.