九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编技巧(很有用)及练习题

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Li Hua

题目②

“我们都在努力奔跑, 我们都是追梦人。”有梦想就有目标, 有希冀才会奋斗。某英文网站正在开展以“We Are All Dreamers”为主题的征文活动, 假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈谈你的梦想是什么？你为什么会有这样的梦想？为了实现你的梦想, 你打算怎么做？提示词语：want to be, like, study hard, come true... 提示问题：● What's your dream and why? ● What will you do to make your dream come true? 【答案】例文：Dear peter, How is it going?

This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities inLonghu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me. We are going to meet at the south gate of Longhu Park at 9 o’clock. We can watch the dragon boat race. It’s very exciting. After that, we will learn how to make Zongzi. I think you will be interested in it. By the way, you can take a camera or your smart phone if you want to take some photos. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给Peter写一封信，邀请他参加端午节游园活动，告诉我们见面的时间、地点以及要做的活动。【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：This Saturday is……，There will be……，We are going to……，We can watch……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示我邀请你参加端午节游园活动，接下来介绍我们见面的时间和地点以及可以做的事，最后期望收到你的回复。此处invite sb to do sth, learn to do sth, be interested in, by the way, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6．（·富顺第三中学校中考模拟）朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。 1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格; 2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事； 3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的要求：

1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密 2. 词数80-100

3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.

I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.

I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever. 【解析】【详解】

试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。【点睛】

人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has +

（straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。

7．（·江苏中考模拟）目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面内容写一篇短文。赞成者的观点反对者的观点 1. 能够学得更好，考试考得更好，上更好的高中； 2. 避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏。 1. 学生需要时间休息； 2. 压力过大不利于身体健康。你的观点 1. 课堂上好好学就足够了，补课不必要； 2. 课后可以自己...... 注意：1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点； 3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that

【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.

Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.

But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.

As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability. 【解析】【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的观点。第四段要表述作者自己的观点。【详解】

写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ·····。They also believe that·。If they take

too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

8．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是Tom, 你的父亲工作很忙，经常熬夜，吸烟，很少吃早餐，也没有时间锻炼，所以身体不太好。6月17日是父亲节，请你根据你父亲的情况，给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他提一些具体的建议。要求:1. 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范。 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。

3. 词数:80词左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.

Yours, Tom

【答案】Dear Dad,

This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.

Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!

Yours, Tom

【解析】【详解】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。通读材料可知，这是一篇向父亲表达情感的写作。因为是写给父亲的一封书信，因此人称为第二人称。时态为一般现在时态。要根据短文提示，把父亲身体不好的原因写清楚，并提出中肯的建议，表达出对父亲的体贴与关爱，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有

一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

9．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数80左右。

One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of

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【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.

To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own. 【解析】【分析】

本文是一篇话题作文。【详解】

根据题干““苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。第三部分：总结全文——我为自己感到骄傲。