初三英语英语书面表达汇编技巧 阅读训练策略及练习题(含答案)及
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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·黑龙江中考模拟)(A)话题作文:现在视力不好的人越来越多,有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。从小保护好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。 内容:(1)眼睛的重要性;
(2)保护眼睛的措施:①不要长时间读书看报; ②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书; ③坚持做眼保健操。
【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes
The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.
How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.
Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses. 【解析】 【详解】
本文属于话题作文,阐述眼睛的重要性以及如何保护眼睛。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
2.(·山东中考模拟)紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束,在装载你收获的行囊----成长记录袋中还应增添一份你自己满意的答案。
根据上述提示,请以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”为题写一篇文章,记录你难忘的校园生活。首句已给出。
注意:. 1.语言通顺,句子连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名或能够透露你个人身份的相关信息。 3.词数80左右,信件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Unforgettable Junior High School Life
How time flies!
【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.
In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life. In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文要求我们以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life为题,回想一下自己即将过去的初中,讲述难忘的初中生活。题目中用思维导图,列出了一些文章中会用到的关键词,供学生们参考使用。审题可知,这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述。题目中并没有给出具体的写作内容,学生们应发挥自己的想象力,可以从自己的学习、爱好、与同学的交往、与老师的相处以及自己的感受等方面进行详细阐述。写作时应注意:首先要展开合理想象,补充文章细节内容,注意各部分内容之间的层次,内容要完整、充实,结构要清晰。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译。句子的结构要完整,可以简单句结构为主,如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次,应穿插使用并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己的初中生活,并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下几个优点:首先文章内容充实、完整,符合题目要求。短文中作者从自己的学习情况、与同学的交往、爱好、特长等方面进行了总结,在最后提出了对未来的希望。层次清晰,结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章第一段引出主题,使用了一般现在时;第二段回忆过去的生活,主要使用了一般过去时;最后对未来提出希望,用到了一般将来时。语法规范,用词准确,注意了名词、动词、形容词等的正确形式。句式结构完整,以简单句为主,也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型,调整了文章节奏,提升了作文档次。短文中较好的句型有:In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。
3.(·河南中考模拟)书面表达
初中生活即将结束。在这三年里你的生活中定不乏难以忘怀的人或事,请以“An unforgettable in my school life”为题,用英语写一篇短文。讲述 一个你最难忘的人或事。
要求: 1.请补全题目,如teacher. classmate或trip等: 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校姓名; 3.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺,80词左右。 【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school life
For these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life. 【解析】 【分析】
本篇是话题作文,介绍自己难忘的人或事。 【详解】
1.本篇要求学生自己补全题目,确定写作的目标,写自己3年初中校园生活里难忘的人或事,描述难忘的人用第三人称,讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时,开头和结尾一般性阐述,用一般现在时;书写时要围绕中心“unforgettable”,叙述清楚具体的事件或情节,文章结构要清晰明了,注意短语、句型的正确使用。
2.本篇例文叙述难忘的英语老师,开头句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主题,正文部分详细描述了老师如何耐心的多方面的帮助自己,结尾句.She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.呼应中心词unforgettable。整篇文章结构严谨,紧扣主题,前呼后应。
3.高分亮点:巧用连词, not only…but also,because of as well as,so…that…句子得以有机结合;短语how to do sth,teach sb to do sth,care for也为文章的语言增色不少。
4.(·北京中考模拟)“ 业精于勤而荒于嬉, 行成于思而毁于随” 。 良好的学习习惯是成功的一半, 只有拥有了良好的学习习惯, 学习才能得到提高。
某英文网站正在开展以“如何养成良好的学习习惯”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你是怎么做的,以及为什么这样做。 提示词语: get ready for, take notes, on time
提示问题: ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life? ●Why do you do so? As a middle school
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【答案】
As a middle school student, it's important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life:
First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.
Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster. 【解析】 【详解】
1. 题干解读:这是一篇提纲式作文。以“如何养成良好的学习习惯”为主题写一篇英文稿件,主要谈谈自己的好的学习习惯。在写作时,要根据提出的几个问题为中心围绕展开,再进行适当的延伸。
2. 例文点评:文章采用三段式,以总分总的形式将文章主题描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的观点,语言层次感很强,表达准确。
3. 高分亮点:
短语:get ready for;take notes;on time;daily life;important points。
句型:It is +adj. for sb. to do sth.;when引导的时间状语从句。
5.(·江苏中考模拟)写作:
81. 目前,很多高中都开设了特色课程,涵盖烘焙、舞蹈、钢琴、跆拳道、足球等内容,很大程度上增加了校园生活的趣味性,但也有人持不同的看法。 作为即将升入高中的你,对于特色文化课程有何看法?请根据下表的提示完成一篇短文并阐述你的观点。 Views on Special Courses 1. 有助于增加我们的技能; 赞同 2. 有利于培养我们不轻易放弃的精神; 3. …… 1. 过多占用学生时间,耽误学习; 不赞同 2. 需要投入更多的钱,增加家庭压力; 3. …… 你的观点 1. …… 2. …… 要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2. 必须包括表格中所有相关信息,并适当发挥; 3. 词数:100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入) 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Views on Special Courses
Nowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Views on Special Courses
Nowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.
Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. What’s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldn’t give up easily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world. However, we can’t reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don’t have so many teachers on these courses. We can’t get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.