译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达(较难)

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【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her.

I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others. 【解析】【分析】

本文一篇话题作文。【详解】

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：交代写作目的：即将毕业，想和大家分享这三年的经历。第二部分：具体介绍三年中最难忘的经历：别人帮助我的经历。第三部分：总结全文。我愿意帮助别人。

7．（·浙江中考模拟）

如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities.

Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment. 【解析】【详解】

这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】

When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？

句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】

It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

8．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink 提示问题： ●When and where are you going to meet? ●What are you going to do there?

●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Pete, How is it going?

I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in

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【答案】 Dear Peter， How is it going?

I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.

I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】【详解】

1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

9．（·广东中考模拟）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做了一次问卷调查。下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调查结果及表达自己的观点。

赞成的学生人数占：57% 理由：不赞成的学生人数占：43% 理由： 1. 强身健体，预防疾病 2. 训练求生技能 3. 休闲娱乐，放松身心你的观点与理由？ 1. 害怕水 2. 有危险性 3. 气温低时容易感冒要求：

1. 词数80左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数） 2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical

education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.

【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.

About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.

However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.

（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）【解析】【详解】

本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给材料，阐明关于“把游泳纳入中考体育考试”的两种不同观点，而且最后还要表达出自己的观点，所以文章主要用一般现在时。文章分为三个部分，第一部分，首先引出本文话题，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上启下的作用，引出调查结果；第二部分分别阐述两种不同观点About 57 per cent students like to have

swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的观点并进行总结In my opinion…。注意阐明观点列举理由时，要注意条理性，比如用到表示次序先后的词first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文内容完整，写作条理清晰，语言表达准确，是一篇不错的文章。

10．（·江苏中考模拟）今年初《流浪地球》在中国火热上映。影片故事设定在2075年，讲述太阳即将毁火，已经不适合人类生存，而面对绝境，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类新家园的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老师问:希望是什么?班长回答:希望是我们这个年代钻石一样的东西。你的笔友Demon观看后，印象深刻，给你写了一封邮件。请你根据邮件内容结合你的情况，用英语回复。 To: LiHua@China. com From: Demon@ America. com Subject:Problems and hope Dear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things? What problems do you often meet in your school life? How do you usually solve your problems? Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her? What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything. Best wishes, Demon 注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数; 2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺; 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Demon

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as

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