译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达(较难)

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一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·全国中考模拟）假如你校正在开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议，号召大家参与此项活动。

1. 没有阅读的习惯，不知道读什么。阅读现状 2. 作业太多，没有足够的时间阅读。 3. 宁愿把空闲时间花在电脑游戏上。你的情况你的想法热爱阅读，学校阅读俱乐部的成员。从阅读中获得了很多知识。自去年9月以来，已看了10多本书。 …… 注意事项：

1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2.在“你的想法”一栏中须围绕主题，用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3.词数在90个左右，短文的开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4.短文内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear friends,

Reading is very important in our daily life. Come on, everyone! Let’s start reading now! 【答案】Dear friends,

Reading is very important in our daily life. But many students don’t have the reading habit. They don’t know what to read. Sometimes there is too much homework to do, so they don’t have time to read. What’s worse, they would rather spend their free time on computer games. I love reading and I’m in the school Reading Club. I got a lot of knowledge through reading. I have read over ten books since last September. I think reading helps open up a whole new world to us. I’m sure reading will be popular as time goes on! Come on, Everyone! Let’s start reading now!

【解析】这是一篇图表，你校正在开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议，号召大家参与此项活动。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础

上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

the reading habit阅读习惯；spend their free time on computer games把空闲时间花在电脑游戏上；

2．（·北京中考模拟）交流可以化解矛盾,增进友谊。当今交流方式很多，但人们之间的情感似乎越来越淡。

学校英语专栏征文，主题是“Ways of Communication Today”。假如你是李华，你对此很感兴趣，准备投稿，谈谈你日常的交流方式及你的感受。提示词语： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear How many ways do you know to communicate with others? 提示问题：·

How do you usually communicate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?

【答案】There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls.

I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most welcome and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, communication becomes easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118）

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如communicate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most welcome and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示的内容逐词翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达 Hey Li Ming,

I will move to your community and stay for two months. I want to know something about your community. What is your community like? What activities do you usually have? How can I get along with your neighbors? Write soon! Yours, Ben

假如你是Li Ming，请用英语给笔友Ben回复邮件。注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ben,

I’m very glad to know that you will come to our community. Yours, Li Ming

【答案】Dear Ben,

I’ m very glad to know that you will come to our community. My community is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it. Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.

All the people in our community are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”. That’s all about our community. I hope you will have a good time here. Yours, Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：本文是要求写一封电子邮件，写作时注意要写信的格式。假如你是Li Ming，请用英语给笔友Ben回复邮件。动笔前要认真阅读电子邮件，写作时需回答邮件内所提问题，可适当发挥。仔细阅读本的电子邮件，找出他的问题（我想了解一下你们社区的情况。你的社区是什么样的？你通常有什么活动？我怎样和你的邻居相处？），然后根据问题做出回答。根据内容可知本文主要时态是一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲：1. 社区是什么样的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活动do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our homework.3. 怎样和邻居相处kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根据提纲连词成句，然后连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。

点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

4．（·湖北中考模拟）为配合我市开展“创建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。提示：

1. 保持环境卫生； 2. 待人有礼，乐于助人； 3. 遵守交通规则；

4. 写出1到2条自己的观点。

要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—3项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥； 2. 内容连贯，表达通顺。 3. 词数：80-100词。

How to Behave Well

Our city should be kept clean every day, so it’s bad manners to litter everywhere. And we should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. It’s also important for us to follow traffic rules. We can only go across the road ,when the traffic lights are green. What’s more, we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be. 【解析】【详解】

本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是为配合我市开展“创建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。根据所给提示内容可知，这是一篇演讲稿，讲我们应该如何做才是文明举止，因此人称用第一人称we来写，时态用一般现在时，重点句型及短语：in order to为了，try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事，be friendly to sb.对某人友好，be ready to do sth.乐于做某事，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do sth.做某事对某人来说怎么样。had better not do sth.最好不要做某事，也可用到should

等情态动词或祈使句。

5．（·山东中考模拟）假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。

要点如下：1.少开汽，多走路。2.停止向河内排放废水。3.少用餐巾纸，塑料袋。4.节约水电，多植树。

要求：1词数：80--100；2.请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥。3.倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。【答案】Dear classmates,

As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting it.Each one of us must do something to help save our plante.Firstly,transportation is the main factor of air pollution.So we should walk more instead of driving.Secondly,industrial pollution is serious.Waste water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water pollution.Thirdly,we should stop using plastic bags when we go shopping.Finally,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our earth. The Students’ Union 【解析】【详解】

这是一篇要求假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

6．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）B）初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想。要求：

1.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

2.语句流畅，过渡自然，语法正确，富有逻辑性。 3. 注意时态的正确使用，80-100词。

提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

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