第3讲 通知、留言、演讲稿,措辞得体突重点
◆2018年全国Ⅲ卷、2014年辽宁卷考查通知,留言和演讲稿很可能会有所考查。
(2018·全国Ⅱ)
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展; 2.放映时间、地点; 3.欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 满分作文第一步 认真审题 谋篇布局 体裁 人称 第二 人称 时态 一般现在时和一般将来时 结构 活动目的→要求→具体细节 要点 ①通知主题;②欢迎参加;③放映时间地点;④欢迎提意见。 通知 满分作文第二步 斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.我们学校将要放映一部英文短片Growing Together。
高级句式(利用过去分词作定语):An English short film __Called_Growing_Together__ will be shown in our school.
2.这部短片与我校发展有关,它将极大地帮助我们学生了解校史并吸引我们为学校发展增砖添瓦。
高级句式(which引导非限制性定语从句):The film tells about the development of our school, __which will greatly help us students know our school’s history and appeal to us to make contributions to our school’s development .
满分作文第三步 巧用过渡 美化成文 【范文赏读】
NOTICE
An English short film, called Growing Together, will be shown in the school hall at 7:30 pm. Everyone is welcome to watch the film. It tells about the development of our school.
The film is believed to be instructive and full of emotion.It tells the story of a school growing up, from small to large,from weak to strong. After the film, each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to make comments and express their views about the film.
We will witness the glory of our school, and we are growing together. The Students’ Union
名 师 点 津
一、通知
高考中的通知通常有两种:一种是以布告的形式把事情通知给有关人员;另一种是以书信形式把相关事情传达给有关人员。写通知类书面表达时一般要注意:
1.通知正文上面正中的地方往往有Notice(或NOTICE)一词。 2.发出通知的人或单位的名称一般写在右下角。 3.主要时态一般为将来时。 书面通知中的常用表达: 1.All are requested to... 通知要求所有人……
2.Every one of you is expected to be part of the event. 每个人都要参加这个活动。
3.An exciting event...is around the corner. 最近要开展一项精彩的……活动。
4.Have an active part in it,and wish you good luck! 快来积极参加吧,祝你们好运!
5.Come on,everybody!It’s your show time! 大家快来吧!展示你们自己的时间到了! 二、演讲稿
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞等。发言稿总是以第一人称的口吻写,开头往往有称呼语,如“Boys and girls”,“Ladies and gentlemen”,或问候语,如“Hello!”“Good afternoon/morning!”等。致辞一般开头要有称呼语。最后要以“Thank you”来致谢。致辞
的常见开头:
1.欢迎辞:
(1)It’s my special pleasure to welcome... 特别高兴地欢迎……
(2)It’s really an honor for me to give a speech here. 在此发表演讲很荣幸。 2.欢送辞:
(1)We enjoyed every minute you spent with us. 我们和你在一起的每一分钟很开心。
(2)Time flies and we have to say goodbye because you...soon. 时间飞逝,我们不得不道别,因为你很快……
考生在写作时要能够使文章内容完整、要点齐全,要用具有感染力和号召力的语言。 三、留言
留言包括留言条,请假条等,可以是书面的,也可以以微信、短信的形式发给接收者。 1.2个特点
(1)留言条一般是在比较熟悉的人之间使用,因此称呼、署名比较随便。 (2)正文内容应简明扼要,要尽量避免语法结构很复杂的句子。 2.4个技巧
(1)审题到位:根据题目要求弄清人称、时态,及相关事件。 (2)要点清楚:用相关的词或短语完整地列出要点。 (3)连词成句:注意英语的习惯表达,根据提纲扩展句子。 必要时适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。 (4)组句成篇:注意语气并使用适当的过渡词。
(2018·襄阳质检)假如你是中学生李华,你市正在创建文明城市,请以“Changes I have
seen”为题发表演讲,呼吁大家为“创建文明城市”做贡献。
要点:1.分享你看到的变化(如交通志愿者); 2.你的呼吁。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增减细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:文明城市civilized city Good morning,everyone!
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________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 【范文赏读】
Good_morning,_everyone!
It’s_a_great_honor_for_me to talk about some changes I’ve witnessed in the process of creating a civilized city. What has impressed me most is the traffic.We often saw pedestrians jump the red light. But now many volunteers stand at the crossroads,reminding the pedestrians to obey the traffic regulations. Of course,as educated citizens,we can do more to help our city to be more civilized,such as arousing the public’s traffic awareness and helping more people to become more self-disciplined.
Just as the saying goes,“Individuals together can make a difference.”I believe our city will become more civilized and harmonious through our joint efforts. So I’m here to appeal to everyone to do your bit for our city. Only in this way will our city take on a new look and become a better place to live in.
Thank_you_for_listening!
真题题组 1通知
(2014·辽宁)
假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 校园campus 创意作品innovation 颁奖prize-giving
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏读】
Notice
An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner . Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.
Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation ,you need to hand in a report ,explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.
All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony ?Sure ! It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success . For any questions ,call Li Hua at 44876655.
Come on ,everybody ! It’s your show time. Student Union
2发言稿
(2016·天津)
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两
2019高考英语二轮专题复习练习:专题五 书面表达 第3讲 通知、留言、演讲稿,措辞得体突重点
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