There are many rules that we have to follow.
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What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules. There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.
In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.
The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture.
What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
本文属于材料作文，向山姆介绍你的家规并向他展示一个温情的中国家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主语。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
10．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意： 1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；
2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提示：electric adj.电 讨论结果 25人表示同意 理由 1.这样很方便；2.能节约上学途中的时间。 35人不同意 1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥挤，骑电动车也快不起来。
【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to
school.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could take
them less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe for
the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morning
the traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly. 【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。
写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles
quickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。 考点：提纲类作文。
(英语)中考英语书面表达答题技巧及练习题(含答案)
