(英语)九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编答题技巧及练习题(含答
案)含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编 1.(·天津中考模拟)书面表达
86.假设你是李华,星期五早上在上学的路上目睹了一起交通事故。根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文。 时间 地点 星期五早上七点 中山路和幸福大街交口 1.一辆小汽车和一个骑车上学的女孩发生碰撞。 事故过程 2.女孩倒地受伤,司机拨打120求助。 3.经医生检查,女孩并无大碍。 事故原因 你的建议 女孩骑车时闯红灯,因此她对事故负有责任。 如何做到安全出行(补充两点具体做法) 参考词汇:检查make an examination 对……负责 be responsible for sth. 要求:
(1)词数:80~100个.
(2)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 At seven o’clock on Friday morning there
was________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street.I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was coming. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But fortunately, after making an examination, the girl was all right. The girl was still riding while the light is red, so she was responsible for the accident.
We should pay attention to safety when crossing the street.We also should obey the traffic rules. 【解析】 【详解】
首先这是一篇以一般过去时为主的文章,所以要注意时态。
重点词汇短语:traffic accident交通事故;across the road过马路;suddenly突然地;At the same time同时;fell down摔倒;send sb to Sp把某人送到某地;make an examination检查; be responsible for sth. 对……负责;pay attention to注意;fortunately幸运地。 重点句型:(1)While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. 当红灯变红的时候,一个骑自行车的女孩突然出现在街上。关系代词who引导的定语从句。
(2) He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. 他试图停车,但为时已晚。try to do sth努力做某事。
(3) I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. 我在等过马路的时候看到了这起事故。状语从句。
2.(·四川中考模拟)旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题,根据以下思维导图的提示,写一篇短文,并发表你的看法。 注意:
1. 要点齐全,适当发挥;
2. 从思维导图Sayings部分,选择恰当的格合理利用在短文中; 3. 词数:100词左右;
【答案】例文
Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如one of the best ways,learn much,an exact picture of,a careful observer,seeing is believing,no matter,a lot等。而非谓语动词结构Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.(·四川中考模拟) 书面表达
暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。
Parents' opinions Get ready for high school. Do some housework… Kid's opinions Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing… Your opinion … 注意]
(1)表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥; (2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息; (4)词数:不少于80。
How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥.写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第三人称,一般现在时态进行叙述.语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯.适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系. 【点睛】
这篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。
4.(·广东中考模拟)假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息,给 David写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。 比例 50% 30% 计划 去国内外旅游 多读一些书 原因 1.放松;2.欣赏美景 1.增长知识;2.培养兴趣 20% 你的计划 参加社会实践 ? (至少一个) 1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友 ?(请你补充)
注意:
(1)邮件应包含所有要点
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数); (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分 注:社会实践 social practice activities Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。