activities are wonderful.
So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school! 【解析】话题作文写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式,谓语动词形式要有根有据,选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态,注意提供的观点、材料,要注意句子的完整性,谓语动词的正确形式,句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文,要忠实于材料,不必扩展,注意用好连词,多用非谓语,慎用较难的句型,一定不能写错句。
15.(·北京中考模拟)自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华,请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何更加自信。 提示词语:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing 提示问题:
Why is it important to be confident? What experience made you more confident? How can we become more confident? It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式,采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确,简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。
16.(·江苏中考模拟)某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛,请你根据表格中的提示内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。 适当的压力 1. 积极思考,认真学习 2. 及时复习,防止遗忘 过重的压力 1. 无法入睡,非常疲惫 2. 害怕考试,导致失败 1. 合理计划,准备充分 2. …… 应对的措施 注意:
1. 词数90左右,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。
How to deal with the exam stress
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【答案】How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress.A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.If we have proper stress,we can think actively and work harder.Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them.So we can pass the exams easily.
However,if we have too heavy stress,we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion,to deal with stress,we'd better plan and prepare well.We should also form some good habits,such as enough exercise and healthy diets.Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams. 【解析】
试题分析:本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。在题目中给出
了一张表格,需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。分析表格可以看到,这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面,第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的;第二个是过多的压力对我们有害;最后发表自己的看法,如何来应对压力。因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写,这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。在每一段中加上具体的内容,使段落更加充实。最后还要补充两点自己的观点。全文需要使用一般现在时态,第一人称来写。注意多使用一些好的句式、短语,增强文章的表现力。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的范文。作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来,并加上了自己的看法。作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分,首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides,还用到了一些复合句,如条件状语从句等; 接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处,段首先用however来进行转折,然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然很短,但是意思很完整;最后作者发表了自己的观点,用了短语in my opinion,还用到了提建议时经常用的had better 和should。整篇作文意思连贯,语言流畅,层次分明。
17.(·江苏中考模拟)写作
81. 春天,许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。为了倡导中学生接近大自然,某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活动,请你根据以下问题,用英语写一篇短文参加征文。 提示:1)What’s the benefit (好处) of outdoor activities? (1-2 opinions) 2)Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? (1-2 examples) 3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥; 3)词数:100词左右,开头已给出,不计入词数; 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.
【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】试题分析:本篇书面表达以“outdoor activities”为话题,结合所给的写作材料,写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态,注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练、要点齐全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词(组)的恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如:It is +形容词+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;时间状语从句等复合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文。
18.(·全国中考模拟)共享单车(shared bikes)在厦门投入使用以来,给人们带来了诸多便利,受到人们的追捧,改变了人们的出行方式,但同时也遇到了一些挑战,它是国民素质的“照妖镜”,请你根据表格中信息的提示,给《21世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。 社会现状 自从出现,饱受赞誉。 1.随处可见,出行方便 诸多优势 2.有益健康,减少污染 3.费用不高,负担得起 存在问题 你的观点 1.未及时归还 2.占道挡路 我认为……(考生自拟,至少2点) 注意事项:1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。 2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。 3.词数在90个左右,文章的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.
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【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high
praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们给《21世纪英文报》投稿,谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容,包括:共享单车的优势;存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达,而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力,组织语言,并表达出来,要求至少两点。通过审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态,第三人称来叙述,短文可以分成两段或者三段,一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用,改变文章句式节奏,使用不同的句式,避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分,使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。用到的短语有reduce pollution 减少污染;What's more 此外,take up 占据,in our way挡我们的路,living a green life 过绿色生活。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段,第一段引出话题共享单车;第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点;第三段介绍了一些问题;最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰,主题明确,有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称,文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主,语法规范,用词准确,句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长句;另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分,如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。
19.(·河北中考模拟)为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性,网上进行了一项安全问题调查。以下是100名 学生伤亡的原因,请根据表格内容用英语写篇调查报告,就中学生应当如何做好自我保 护这一问题谈谈你的看法。
要求:80词左右。题目自拟,文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 Percentage 63% The place Streets or roads The reason Car accident