复习专题——中考英语书面表达知识点归纳(word)
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1.近日,某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动,请根据右侧表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇征文。
1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 学生们认为 2.很新鲜,学习更感兴趣 3.…… 家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 1.…… 2.…… 你的观点
注意:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,观点可作适当发挥; 3)词数:90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目要求,需要书写一篇议论文,探讨iPad进课堂这一现象,以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态,第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式,首先在第一段提出问题现象,第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处,第三段描
述反对人的观点及原因,最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语,固定句型,使文章增色。 点睛:对立观点式 第一段:提出现象。
第二段:Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原
因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。 第三段:However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理
由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。 第四段:There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2.假定你是David,来自美国,你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者,他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复,可以有适当的发挥。 To: davidwoodlandschool@qq.com From: limingsunshineschool@qq.com Subject: Volunteering Dear David, I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Li Ming 注意:1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数; 2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your
questions.
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I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on. It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news. Best wishes David 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,给好友Li Ming回信,介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I'm glad……,we can……,It’s OK to……,If your parents don’t allow you to…….,you should……,I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴,接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题,最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3.书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty,日前收到了Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦恼,请你根据Lucy的来信,用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks. _______________________________________ All the best! Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over. All the best! Betty 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如in recent years,as a product of,live in,more and more,so…that,for example,do harm to,be harmful to,in my opinion,take the place of,instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理,而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意
总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
4.书面表达
假定你是李华,最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论,你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信 询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信,简单介绍以下讨论结果: 1.节水节电. 2.垃圾分类 3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕 4.步行、骑自行车或公交出行、 参考词汇:low carbon低碳;tissue纸巾
词数:100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,向我的英国朋友Peppa写信,介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨