(英语)九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧(超强)及练习题(含答案)及解析

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（英语）九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧(超强)及练习

题(含答案)及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·湖北中考模拟）学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以＂How Can We Protect Ourselves?＂为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护（self-protection）。提示：1. never swim alone; 2. be careful to make friends;

3. call the police when you are in danger; 4. eat healthy food;

5. don’t crowd（go upstairs and downstairs）.

要求：1. 句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

How Can We Protect Ourselves?

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【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 【解析】这篇作文要求我们以How can we protect ourselves为题，谈一谈青少年在日常生活中应该如何保护自己。这是一篇话题作文，文章中只给出了写作的题目，而未给出具体

的内容，因此首先学生们应结合自己的日常生活，发挥想象力，先列出文章具体内容的提纲，然后根据题纲来组织语言，最后成文。这样的题目是有点难度的，但也一定程度上放开了学生的思维，学生们可以根据自己所想来写作，而不用受到内容的限制。写之前，要注意确定文章应使用的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇作文应以第一人称we为主，一般现在时态来叙述。注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，以主谓宾和主系表的结构为基础，写出正确的句子，然后为提升文章档次，使用几个较复杂的句型，如复合句、非谓语动词、被动结构等等。还应注意语句之间的连接，使用一些短语、副词等，使整篇文章意思连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容符合题目要求，并且内容充实、完整，表达清楚、明了。作者从三个方面讲述了自己的看法，这几个方面都非常符合实际，所提建议很合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第一人称为主，语法规范、准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.两句话中使用了状语从句；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 中非谓语动词的使用。文章各部分之间使用了较好的连接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，这些词汇和短语的使用让文章具有连贯性。

2．（·河北育华中学中考模拟）你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。

内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。

作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my

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【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study. I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.

How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write

what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next. 【解析】【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

86.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。（1）父母规矩太多，不允许晚上出去，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己。（2）你应该理解父母，他们是爱孩子的，希望孩子前程似锦。（3）你与父母保持良好关系的做法：努力学习，听父母话。（4）……（至少一条）。要求：

（1）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。（3）词数：80～100个。

（4）短文的开头己给出，不计入总词数。 How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me...

【答案】How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own

decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework. 【解析】【详解】

某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。注意文中用第一人称书写；2.时态以一般现在时为主；3.体裁为说明文，可稍加评论；4.合理想象，发表你对压力的看法；5.语句通顺。意思连贯；【点睛】

本文语句通顺，段落分明。文中用到了一些好的句型：However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,这里给文章增色不少。

4．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

生活中常常会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。有些人冷静温和地处理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的经历与看法。内容包括： 1. 请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；

2. 你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）； 3. 呼吁大家友好相处。作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful. In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should communicate more and put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.

It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better. 【解析】【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each other.和Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】

5．（·无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达

亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。

Kids often talk to their parents Kids think their parents understand them Kids have different ideas from their parents Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of… China 48.1% 61% 82.1% Schoolwork （65.4%） US 89% 81.4% 76% Pocket money （20%）注意事项：

1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开； 2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；

3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。【答案】How to get along well with parents

More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.

CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese