注:社会实践 social practice activities Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6.(·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟)写作
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。
某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括: What do you often do for your parents? Why should we honor our parents? How should we honor our parents?
要求: 1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.____________________________ 【答案】We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them. 【解析】 【分析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点,写一篇作文 【详解】
这是篇材料作文,主要内容要点已给,所以考生要围绕着要点,进行写作,不要遗漏,当然顺序可以适当调整。这篇作文又句型亮点,例如:As we know,…众所周知;.I think it's our duty to do sth等等,其次文章结构也比较清晰,例如第二段的衔接词,First of all,Then,Next,使用的简单而恰当。
7.(·辽宁中考模拟)(B)根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:
1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异. 2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己. 3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮. 4.女孩也喜欢运动,希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条. 5.你对运动的观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数. 8.参考词语:keep slim (保持苗条) What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in
sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports. 【解析】 【详解】
本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法,应该用一般现在时态,写作要点要包括:1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析(多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点)。3.提出自己对运动的观点。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好地完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,主谓一致,在文中使用了时间状语从句,定语从句,特别使用一些亮点词句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,句子通顺,行文连贯。
8.(·河南中考模拟)有一种爱,它是无言的,是严肃的,在当时往往无法细诉,然而,它让你在过后的日子里越体会越有味道,一生一世忘不了,它就是那宽广无边的父爱。父亲节马上就要到了,你准备为敬爱的父亲做些什么?请以“Warm Father's Day”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。 要求:1.词数80左右;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
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【答案】Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so? 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇命题作文。要求以“Warm Father's Day”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过“父亲节”这个特别的日子。首先我们要认真审题,看清题意,确定文章的中心思想、主题。在写作时,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意准确运用时态和人称,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;另外,可以用上一些句型、短语,较高级的语言,这样会使文章更出色。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。 要求:1.词数80左右;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
9.(·江苏扬州教育学院附中中考模拟)你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛,你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述,请根据提示,以“Kindness is a gift”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求: 1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括提示中所有信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Kindness is a gift Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?
That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【答案】例文Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.
I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【解析】 【详解】
你校正在举办以“社会主义核心价值观”为主题的英语演讲比赛,你准备从“和善”这一点展开论述,请根据提示,以“Kindness is a gift”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。内容要求中指出了写作要点,动笔前一定要认真阅读内容要点,根据内容要点组织材料,确定句子人称,时态等问题。可以先把各要点用句子表达出来,然后再组合成文。写作中注意语意通顺,符合逻辑关系,为了使短文更显得有逻辑性,在列举自己的优势时,可以适当使用序数词。举出的例子要有说服力,想象合理并适当发挥,不能遗漏要点。注意采用一些习惯的句式,固定短语,以使自己的演讲稿更有文采。写完后多读几遍,适当修改。 【点睛】
这是一篇非常优秀的文章,作者用到了一些好的句型:it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.;If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson.这些给文章增色不少。
10.(·安徽中考模拟)书面表达
李华所在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动,假定你是李华,请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节,内容包括: 1. 今年庆祝时间(6月18日)
2. 节日由来:纪念(be in memory of)屈原
3. 吃粽子,赛龙舟,挂菖蒲和艾草(calamus and Ay Tsao)…… 4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日 注意:1. 词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头已写好,不计入总词数。 Dear fellows,
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.