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Dear Elli,
I’m a senior student. I like make friends with people but I do my best to get on
well everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she disliked me and that he didn’t want to be my friend any more. Now she has started to make fun of me because of I’m fat. I’m kind to her, but why can’t she be friend of mine? Other problem is about my weight. Should I do less exercise or use pills? And do you know any other way? Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
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Dear Sir,
I am now a college student at Peking University. I’m quite interested in the position offering by your website for part-time English reporters. I think I’m fit the job. As a student, I’ve read a lot and have many knowledge in different field. I’m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I’m easily to get along with and I enjoy working together with another. Above all, I once work as a reporter for my college broadcast station. So I’m sure I can do the job well if I will get the chance work for a website. I’m looking forward to your reply.
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Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that if you study all the times you will become a boring person. You must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do not have to compete your classmates. No one can be happier in studying seven day and seven nights a week.
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Dear Tracy，
Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions. He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house while he did this all time. I think he fails to set an example me to follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t bear what he does. I have been tried many times to talk with he but
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外研版英语短文改错(英语资料)
