2024-2024学年人教版英语必修四新素养同步讲义：Unit 1 Women of achievement 5 Section Ⅴ Writing Word

Section Ⅴ Writing

人物描写

文体感知

人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。 一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。

增分佳句

1．He is always warm-hearted and ready to offer help whenever others are in need of help. 每当人们需要帮助时，他总是热心肠，乐于帮助他人。

2．To ensure that we can concentrate on our studies, Mr Wang does whatever he can do for us.

为确保我们全身心学习，王老师尽他所能帮助我们。 3．Such is Li Ping, a simple, honest and hard-working person. 这就是李萍，一位简朴、诚实、勤劳的人。 写作模板

________(人名), who is already ________(年龄), lives in ________(住址)．

When he/she was young, ________(事件). From ________(时间) to ________(时间), he/she ________(事件或经历). He/She does whatever he/she can do ________(助人). Thanks to his/her help, ________(成就或成绩)．

Such is ________(人名). He/She is ________(评价) and I should learn from him/her.

写作要求

(2024·泰安高一检测)假定下周日是父亲节，某英语刊物正在进行标题为“我的父亲”的征文活动。请按照下面所提供的主要内容，写一篇短文。

1．你父亲是个农村人，50多岁，没有文化，但他很关心你的学习情况； 2．探望父亲的一次经历； 3．归纳总结父亲的品行。 注意：1.词数：100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 审题谋篇

词汇推敲

1．五十多岁 2．总共，加起来等于 3．重视

4．鼓励我努力学习 5．确保 6．集中精力 7．感动 8．热泪盈眶 遣词造句 1．完成句子

①我的父亲五十多岁了，住在农村。

My father is already in__his__fifties and lives in__the__countryside．

②尽管他受教育仅仅一年的时间，但他非常重视我的学习，鼓舞我努力学习。 Although y__hard．

③我的父亲为我竭尽所能以确保我全身心学习。

My father does whatever he can do for me in__order__that__I__can__concentrate__on my study.

④一次他病重，大夫让他在床上休息几天。 Once

he

was

badly

ill

and

his

schooling

adds

up

to

no

more

than

one

year,

in__one’s__fifties add__up__to

attach__importance__to

encourage__me__to__study__hard ensure/make__certain concentrate__on/focus__on move/touch

burst__into__tears/be__filled__with__tears

he__attaches__great__importance__to__my__study__and__always__encourages__me__to__studthe__doctor__asked__him__to__stay__in__bed__for__several__days．

⑤当我回家看望他时，我看到他在地里干活。

When__I__got__home__to__see__him,__I found him working in the fields. ⑥我深受感动，禁不住热泪盈眶。

I was moved so deeply that I__couldn’t__help__bursting__into__tears． ⑦这就是我的父亲，一位简朴、诚实、勤劳的人。

Such__is__my__father,__a__simple,__honest__and__hard-working__person. 2．句式升级

⑧用who引导的非限制性定语从句改写句①

My__father,__who__is__already__in__his__fifties,__lives__in__the__countryside. ⑨用to ensure＋that宾语从句改写句③

To__ensure__that__I__can__concentrate__on__my__study,__my__father__does__whatever__he__can__do__for__me.

⑩用so＋adj./adv.置于句首的倒装句改写句⑥

So__deeply__moved__was__I__that__I__couldn’t__help__bursting__into__tears. 妙笔成篇

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version：

My Father

My father, who is already in his fifties, lives in the countryside. Though his schooling adds up to no more than one year, he attaches great importance to my study and always encourages me to study hard.

To ensure that I can concentrate on my study, my father does whatever he can do for me. Once he was badly ill and the doctor asked him to stay in bed for several days. When I got home to see him, I found him working in the fields. So deeply moved was I that I couldn’t help bursting into tears.

Such is my father, a simple, honest and hard-working person.

你校英语报刊登了下面一则资料。现需要补充一份英文说明。请你根据提示，完成这份说明材料。

姓名：赛珍珠(Pearl S. Buck) 国籍及职业：美国著名作家 生卒年月日：1892.6.26－1973.3.6 经历及贡献：

1．在中国度过了童年时期；

2．在中国生活了40年，把汉语当作“第一语言”；

3．20世纪20年代开始写作，1931年出版的《大地》(The Good Earth)，于1932年获得普利策奖(Pulitzer Prize)，1938年获得诺贝尔文学奖，是唯一一个同时获得普利策奖和诺贝尔文学奖的女作家。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version：

Pearl S. Buck, who was born on June 26, 1892 and died on March 6, 1973, was a great American writer.

She spent her childhood in China because her parents both worked in China. Having lived here for forty years, she regarded Chinese as her first language and China as her second hometown. She began to write in the 1920s and wrote many famous novels. The Good Earth, which was published in 1931, won the Pulitzer Prize in 1932 and the Nobel Prize in 1938, making her the only woman writer to win both the two prizes in history.

Her novels are still popular among readers and she has been considered as one of the most popular writers in the world.