me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
【第一句】that→ where. 本题考察宾语从句,引导词在从句中充当地点状语,所以that改为where。
【第二句】去掉but. 本题考察连词,从属连词though与并列连词but不可以连用,所以去掉but。
【第四句】had→ have. 本题考察动词时态,根据上下文可知整篇文章描述的是现在的一般性情况,应该用一般现在时,所以had改为have。
【第五句】honest→ honesty. 本题考察名词,根据句意“成功的关键是诚信”可知“诚信”应用名词形式,所以honest改为honesty。
【第六句】or→ and. 本题考察并列连词,由上下文句意可知,他确保fresh vegetables和high quality oil都需要使用,而不是二选一,所以or改为and。
【第六句】using→ used. 本题考察被动语态,根据句意“新鲜的蔬菜和高品质的油被用来煮食物”可知应用被动语态,所以using改为used。
【第七句】 dreams后加of. 本题考察动词短语搭配,“梦想做某事”应该是dream of doing sth.,所以在dreams 后加上of。
【第七句】the→ a. 本题考察冠词,根据上下文可知,句子意思为“在一段短暂的时间内”,并没有特指在哪一段时间,所以应该把the改为a。
【第八句】our→ his. 本题考察代词,根据上下文可知餐厅主人是我叔叔,所以应该把our改为his。
【第八句】 steady→ steadily. 本题考察副词,grow是一个动词,表示“发展”,应该用副词修饰,表示“稳定地发展”,所以把steady改为steadily。
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms. Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文(仅供参考)
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua and I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
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