发表观点
写作练兵
(2015青岛改编)现在,很多中学生被近视困扰,请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。 内容包括:1. 造成近视的原因;
2. 近视对学习或生活的影响;
3. 你认为应该如何保护视力?(至少两条建议)
要求:1. 语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now.
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1. 以“学生患近视”为话题,写一篇关于近视的记叙文;
2. 内容包括近视的原因,对人的影响以及自己提出的保护视力的方法或建议; 3. 描述现象时,时态为一般现在时;
4. 词数:80左右,文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。 【写作指导】
中学生近视 要点提示 开头:提出问题 素材串联 相当多的学生近视(have become near sighted) 1. 近视产生的原因(学习时习惯不好)(a good habit, study) 正文: 分析原因,描述影响,提出建议。 2. 近视对学习或生活的影响:(1)没有眼镜上课不能记笔记(at home, take notes,in class) (2)游泳时戴着眼镜不方便(feel uncomfortable,swim with
glasses) 3. 建议保护视力的办法: (1)不要长时间看书,不休息(on the one hand, shouldn’t study for hours,need to relax) (2)多进行体育活动,做眼保健操(on the other hand, have sports, do eye exercises, helpful) 结尾:提出倡议,保护眼睛。 【高分范文】
Quite_a_lot_of_students_have_become_nearsighted_now. I think the main reason is that students don’t have a good habit while studying. Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study. For example, if we leave our glasses at home, we can’t take notes in class. We will feel uncomfortable when we swim with glasses. Here is my advice: on the one hand, teenagers shouldn’t study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax. On the other hand, having sports and doing eye exercises are also helpful. It’s very important to have good eyesight. So let’s take good care of our eyes.
拥有好的视力很重要,保护好眼睛(very important,have good eyesight,take good care of)
话题2 发表观点(2012年考查)
Passage 2(2015商丘模拟)
出国求学的利与弊
近几年,中学生出国求学已经成为一种新的“时尚”,大家对此褒贬不一,请你写一篇英语短文,并发表自己的看法,内容包含支持者与反对者的观点。
要求:1. 语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 80词左右。
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