【题文】
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地音乐厅要举办中国音乐会。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括: 1. 写信目的； 2. 个人优势； 3. 能做的事情。 注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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Hearing that there’s a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall, I intend to acquire more details.
For starters, due to my insatiable curiosity associated with Chinese folk art, I apply to be a volunteer in the hall during my summer break in London. In addition, I was born to have the capability to conduct people, and therefore my strength lies in organizing. Last but not least, since the visitors coming to the music hall are on a national scale, it is my duty to maintain a normal order throughout the concert.
Judging from what I’ve stated, you’re bound to have a gist of it. But words fail to convey my sincere gratitude if I were chosen to become a volunteer in the music hall. 【解析】 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请做伦敦当地中国音乐会的志愿者。【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1. 写明写信目的 2. 介绍个人优势； 3. 写出能做的事情。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
volunteer ;a concert concerning Chinese music; insatiable curiosity；be associated with; apply to; have the capability to do; lies in; maintain; Judging from; formal; gratitude. 第三步：连词成句
1. There’s a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall 2. I apply to be a volunteer in the hall during my summer break in London.
3. I was born to have the capability to conduct people, and therefore my strength lies in organizing.
4. It is my duty to maintain a normal order throughout the concert. . 5. Judging from what I’ve stated, you’re bound to have a gist of it.
6. Words fail to convey my sincere gratitude if I were chosen to become a volunteer in the music hall.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了非谓语动词，如：Hearing that there’s a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall,这句话运用了现在分词作状语；due to my
insatiable curiosity associated with Chinese folk art使用了过去分词做后置定语。使用了一些固定词组，如be associated with ; be bound to do; lie in; be born to do等。另外，文章恰当地使用了衔接词，思路清晰、层次分明。
【标题】湖北省部分重点中学2024届高三上学期零模考试英语试题 【结束】
湖北省部分重点中学2024届高三上学期零模考试英语试题
