初三英语英语书面表达汇编(一)解题方法和技巧及练习题及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·北京中考模拟)为了帮助同学们树立集体观念和提高班级责任感,你校英文报刊正在以“ Building a Harmonious Class” (创建和谐班级)为题征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈班级成 员应该如何创建一个和谐的班集体,作为一名成员,你通常是怎么做的,以及还需要再做些什么。
提示词语: important, respect, trust, help
提示问题: ● Why should we build a harmonious class? ● As a member of a class, what do you usually do? ● What else do you need to do?
We should build a harmonious class because ____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily. As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.
Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.
【解析】这篇作文给出的写作背景是:你们学校英文报刊在以Building a Harmonious Class为题征文,你来为校刊投稿,谈一谈如何创建一个和谐的班集体、你通常是怎么做的以及你还需要做什么。这是一篇开放性的作文,题目中只给出了话题和大概的一个提纲,具体的写作内容需要我们自己思考,发挥想象力来充实完成。因此首先我们要仔细思考这个问题,结合自己的真实生活,想一想平时是怎么做的,应该怎么做。这是写作中的一个难点。另外一个难点是使用正确的英语将自己的所想表达出来,英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,写作时,不能逐词去翻译,而应从文章、句子的整体考虑,首先确定这篇短文使用什么人称、时态来叙述;可能用到哪些词汇、短语和句型,每个句子应以简单句为基础,如主谓宾结构或主系表结构,然后再变化成较高级、复杂是句型,如复合句、非谓语动词形式等。另外还应注意语句之间的连接,使用恰当的连词或副词,使文意衔接紧密、意思连贯。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、充实。作者根据题目要求就如何创建和谐班级发表了自己的看法。短文中作者结合了自己日常生活中的所作所为,使文章的内容非常真实。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章中以第一人称为主、一般现在时态来叙述,符合题目要求。语法规范,句式表达符合英语的习惯。文章中以简单句为主,也使用了并列句和复合句,调整文章结构,使用复杂句型、短文和较高级的句型,提升了文章的档次。这些较好的句型和短语有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and
listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help them.等等。
2.(·广州市第十六中学中考模拟)书面表达
初中就要毕业了,校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华,请根据要点 写一封信,说说你的计划。 活动 时间 地点 参与者 活动内容 毕业晚会 6月28日晚上七点 学校礼堂school hall 全体初三学生和老师 1. 邀请校长作演讲; 2. 互赠礼物送祝福; 3. 各班表演精彩节目 4. 要求:1.要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺,连贯; 2.正确使用语态,语法正确,书写整洁。 3.80词左右,开头结尾己给出,不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。 Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours Lihua 【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best wishes, Yours,
Li hua 【解析】 【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。 【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
3.(·北京中考模拟)题目②
“持之以恒,方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事(爱好,习惯……),你是怎样做的,以及你的感受。
提示词语:keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud 提示问题:1. What did you do? 2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes,I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future. 【解析】 【分析】
本篇是材料作文,根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事;文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。 【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料,用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事,根据提示,描写“What did you do?用一般过去时,描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题,文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”,正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格,通过克服困难、不懈地努力,坚持跑步,到现在比以前会跑;结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响;文章结构清晰,前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of;不定式in order to;try my best to;状语从句so…that …;比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等;短语多彩、文句表达多样。
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4.(·河南中考模拟)书面表达
生命就像是一种回声,你送出什么它就送回什么,你播种什么就收获什么,你给予什么就得到什么。因此,人们常说“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。请以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 为题写一篇短文。
要求:1. 思路清晰,观点明确,语法正确,有说服力; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 80词左右。
Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
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【答案】Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
Nobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.
All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped. 【解析】 【详解】
本文属于话题作文,主要讲述“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运
用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如adj+enough,on the one hand,on the other hand,make sb do,get into trouble,thanks to,it is adj for sb to do sth。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
5.(·黑龙江中考模拟)假如你是吴浩,你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们准备坐飞机去,请你给旅行社写封电子邮件,咨询有关航班,酒店和旅游景点的情况。留下你的电话,以便旅行社和你联系。 Dear Sir or Madam,
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____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Wu Hao
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help. Best wishes! Wu Hao 【解析】