【英语】中考英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题
一、英语书面表达
1.近日,某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动,请根据右侧表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇征文。
1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 学生们认为 2.很新鲜,学习更感兴趣 3.…… 家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 1.…… 2.…… 你的观点
注意:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,观点可作适当发挥; 3)词数:90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
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Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目要求,需要书写一篇议论文,探讨iPad进课堂这一现象,以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态,第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式,首先在第一段提出问题现象,第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处,第三段描
述反对人的观点及原因,最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语,固定句型,使文章增色。 点睛:对立观点式 第一段:提出现象。
第二段:Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原
因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。 第三段:However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理
由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。 第四段:There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2.假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息,给 David写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。 比例 50% 30% 20% 你的计划 计划 去国内外旅游 多读一些书 参加社会实践 ? (至少一个) 原因 1.放松;2.欣赏美景 1.增长知识;2.培养兴趣 1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友 ?(请你补充)
注意:
(1)邮件应包含所有要点
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数); (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分 注:社会实践 social practice activities Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
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Best wishes! Yours Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华,你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息,给Billy回封电子邮件,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。 写作要点:
1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试(physical test)做准备。 2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况:
(1)每天锻炼的时间:不到一个半小时。 (2)偶尔不锻炼的原因:作业多,没时间。
(3)擅长的体育运动:球类运动。 3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。 写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.
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___________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,给Billy回封电子邮件,介绍自己平时的锻炼情况,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。 【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I am busy……,because I have……,Doing exercise can help……,So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信,接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况,最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth,
prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4.书面表达
每年的4月23日是世界读书日,这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书,促成长”活动,请你根据这项活动的主题,向全校同学发出倡议。
1. 获取知识,开阔视野 读书的意义 2. 使人愉悦,益于学习 3. ……(自由发挥) 现状 倡议 1. 作业多,无良好读书习惯 2. 不知道读什么书,不会选择 ……(至少两点) 注意:1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2. 短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear classmates,
Reading is very important in our daily life.
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【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life.
First of all,reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books.It can also help to open up a whole new world to us.Second,reading will/can make us clever and happy.It is good for our study and it can help us grow up.Third,reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful.
However,there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet.
In my opinion,our school can have a\.Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let's start reading now!
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so
【英语】中考英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题



