2020-2021年 中考英语书面表达专题剖析与专题同步训练(含答案)经典
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1.近日,某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动,请根据右侧表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇征文。
1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 学生们认为 2.很新鲜,学习更感兴趣 3.…… 家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 1.…… 2.…… 你的观点
注意:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,观点可作适当发挥; 3)词数:90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目要求,需要书写一篇议论文,探讨iPad进课堂这一现象,以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态,第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式,首先在第一段提出问题现象,第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处,第三段描
述反对人的观点及原因,最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语,固定句型,使文章增色。 点睛:对立观点式 第一段:提出现象。
第二段:Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原
因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。 第三段:However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理
由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。 第四段:There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2.“扬帆起航新学期,学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了,在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获,请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧!
要求:1. 内容完整,语言流畅,书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名,校名。100 词左右。
【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.
As old saying goes, \arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies. Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be going to,graduate from,to begin with,both…and,get along well with others,be active in,as important as,as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用,既丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,更使短文很有条理,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3. 写作
假定你是李华,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陈述自己的理由。 3. 提出至少2条建议。 【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her
have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some all-A students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头表明自己的看法,接下来陈述自己的理由,最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4.书面表达
“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所 给要点,写