初三英语英语书面表达汇编及其解题技巧及练习题(含答案)含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·全国中考模拟)假如你是Ivy,你们学校正在开展“爱心传递,从我做起”主题教育活动。请你根据所列提示问题谈谈你对这个活动的认识,用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿。 提示问题:
(1) Why do you show your kindness to others? (At least one reason)
(2) What do you usually do when someone needs help? (At least two examples) (3) How do you feel? 写作要求:
(1) 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; (2) 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
(3) 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.
【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.
As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have become close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.
【解析】这是一篇关于学校正在开展“爱心传递,从我做起”主题教育活动,谈谈自己的看法;
英语作文要注意人称和时态,注意提供的观点、材料,要注意句子的完整性,谓语动词的正确形式,句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文,要忠实于材料,不必扩展,注意用好连词,多用非谓语,慎用较难的句型,一定不能写错句。
It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是怎样的;make great progress 取得巨大进步
2.(·河南中考模拟)“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所
作为。请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题,介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是开放式的,题目中只给了主题,具体的写作内容,需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。审题可知,体裁是记叙文,记叙一件自己做过的事情,且是能让自己感到自豪的,故文章应使用一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成,开头引出话题;第二部分为中心,具体描述事情的过程;最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语,应从句子的整体结构出发,使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构,如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次,穿插使用并列句或复合句,如宾语从句、状语从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,以使文意连贯。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。短文有如下几个特点:首先短文内容完整、充实,叙述具体,详细,作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事,符合题目要求。文章分三段,第一段用一句话引出话题;第二段详细描写了事情的过程;最后一段写了自己的感受。结构清晰,安排合理。其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述,注意了谓语动词过去式的变化,尤其是不规则动词的过去式。语言得体,语法规范,句式结构以简单句为主,也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。短文中较好的句型和短语有:I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。
3.(·河北中考模拟)书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。 提示:(1)What was the event? (2)How did you make it? (3)What’s your feeling?
要求:(1)发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。 (2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 (3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)。 Believe Myself, and I Will Win Hello,
everyone!___________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening. 【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me. Thank you for your listening. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题,写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示,审题可知,文章应包括以下内容:首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事;然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难,最后取得成功的;最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要,发挥自己的想象力,将这些内容补充完整,用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意:首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容,不能遗漏要点,可以根据表达需要适当发挥,但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能按照汉语思维,逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发,选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为主,穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次,应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有内容,没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合
理,层次清晰。短文主要分成三段,每一段主题都很明确,叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时,动词形式变化准确,尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式,语法规范,用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富,有简单句、并列句、复合句,长短句结合,增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型,如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。
4.(·天津中考模拟)假如你是李明,5月18日星期六这一天,你与几位同班同学一起参观了水上公园 (Water Park)。请根据下面的内容提示,写一篇日记。 (1)乘.坐大巴约一小时后到达目的地,游客多; (2)上午划船,下午看了许多动物,例如…: (3)碰到几位外国朋友并与他们交谈: (4)看到了乱扔垃圾、插队等不良现象: (5)你的感想… 参考词汇:.插队cut in line 要求:
(1)词数:80?100个。
(2)短文的开头己给出,不计入总词数 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥?
May 18, Saturday Fine
Today I visited Water Park with several of my
classmates.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】May 18, Saturday Fine
Today I visited Water Park with several of mv classmates. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. When we arrived, there were a lot of visitors.
In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas,
giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.
In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,要求写参观日记。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态和关键单词等问题。为了使语言更显亲切,在写作时主语用第一人称,时态以一般过去时为主。同时注意时间状语与时态的搭配及主谓一致问题,适当使用连词,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误,做到语意连贯。 【点睛】
此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读题目要求,结合所给材料确定内容,不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识,不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够,就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应对考试,可以有选择的背诵一些范文,这样应考时就会有法可依。
5.(·北京中考模拟)年2月20日,中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你该怎么做,以及这样做的意义。 提示词语:pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful. 【解析】 【详解】
题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按照应用文格式写,写作时承接短文开头,具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。