2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。 要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。
6．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。 要点：
不重视课外阅读的原因 1. 作业太多 2. 没有读书习惯 3. 时间花在电脑或网络上 课外阅读的好处 1. 更多地了解世界 2. 学会如何思考 3. 生活更加丰富多彩 对学校或同学的建议 ……（至少一点） 注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出的内容不记入总词数）； 2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other. 【解析】 略
7．书面表达
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.” ----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.” ----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》 “We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.” ----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。 要点提示：
1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实； 2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大； 3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动； 4.补充自己的观点。 写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯； 2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。 Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved. 【解析】 【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。
2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何实现自己的目标（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章开头，句意完整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。 3.高分亮点：
高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。
高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。
8．写作
某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点: 1. Who was the person you made happy? 2. When was it? 3. What did you say or do? 4. Why did it make him/her happy? 5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。 2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now. In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过
去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。
写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。
9．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计
划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。 写作内容：
1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。 2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。 3.读自己喜欢的书。
4.远离危险的地方。 写作要求：
1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。
2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。 3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。
My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday. 【解析】
试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”
等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。 考点：考查提纲作文。
10．书面表达
假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。 写作要点：
1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。 2介绍活动的情况：
（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。
（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。 （3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。 3说一说网上购书有什么好处。 写作要求：
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4至少80词。 Dear Angel,
How are you doing? Best wishes! Yours, Cathy
【答案】Dear Angel,
How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。
Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another . Best wishes!
【英语】 中考英语书面表达专题剖析与专题同步训练(含答案)经典
