求职信,要把握好细节(精选多篇)
第一篇:成功求职信模板的要点:要把握好细节 求职信不是coverletter,而是自我表白,归根结底是为了突出求职者对某一企业及某一职(来源 ent …… ansent …… believing that there is an opportunity …… thinking that there is a vacancy in your company …… having read your ad ……
再比较下列三句。(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得较恰当。
a:(1)replying to your recent advertisement in the boston evening globe, i anager……
(2)in applying for the position of sales manager i offer my qualifications, eet your exacting requirements.
b:(1)i believe after reading your advertisement in this morning’s journal that you have just the opportunity i am looking for.
(2)your advertisement in this morning’s journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my
qualifications for this position
c:(1) having read your advertisement in the nees for an accountant, i thought you might be interested in my application.(2)in your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, e an applicant for the position. here are my reasons for believing i am qualified for this e to , i should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 我对待遇总是无法定下确切数目,但既然您要我说明,我认为月薪六千五百元就满意了。
b: although it is difficult for me to say pensation i should deserve, i should consider******a month a fair initial salary. 虽然我很难说待遇应该是多少,我认为每月******起薪合适。
c:i feel it is presumptuous of me to state y salary should be. my first consideration is to satisfy you completely. ho serving my apprenticeship, i should consider*****a month satisfactory compensation. 我不敢冒昧提出起薪是多少。最初我仅想如何做好工作,使您满意。在学徒(试用)期间,
月薪*****即可。
提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用。a: as for salary, i do not knoonth be too much? 至于起薪,我不知怎么说,月薪四千五百元会不会太多?
b:do you think i should be asking too much if i said 5000 dollars a month? 若要求月薪五千元,会不会太高?
c:you knoy services are y letter, i shall be glad to talk y application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, i should e the opportunity to talk ay judge my personal qualifications further.
b:(1)怀疑,不妥、不安全的: if you’re interested, let me knomediately, as i’m sure and intervie the man for the job. 如果贵公司有兴趣,请与我联系,我认为与您面谈后可以使您相信,我可以胜任这份工作。
(2)改写后: may i have an interviee by telephone at beijing 123456 bet. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 我们可以面谈吗?可在每天上午七至九点,下午五点半至九点与我电话联系,