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考研作文魔块 2010年
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In
your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.
This is an interesting/vivid picture full of instruction/profound implications and it tells us how prosperous the flower of culture is, whereas the way of culture integration is roughly simple. Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that floating in the air is the
delicious odour of the culture integration, with various schools of civilization stirring up in the hot pot. It is a perfect example of the shortage of multi-culturism. Nowadays fast-food culture is invading our world, where pseudo-experts demonstrate their muscles recklessly in public.
While I am looking at this cartoon, I can’t help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, I have found that not many people around me have the patient for further and profound self-cultivation. The first and foremost goes to the society where quick efficiency and result is the only benchmark to evaluate the successes of projects or scholars. Naturally, fast-food culture is extremely popular among us, since it meets our need of quick updating of our education regardless of how shallow and pretentious it is. What’s more, with the rapid social development, people are facing great pressure and they are short of time for a profound base of self-cultivation. They have a greedy hunger for successes or promotion.
We are so lucky to live in such a period with civilized policy and rapid social development. With more and more people giving great attention to the restoration of multi-culturism and the ways of culture integration and with the increasing efforts and care coming from the central government and our society to help younger generation strive for a rich and fulfilled life, I am so confident that more and more young people will lead a magnificent life peacefully, enjoying the beauty of culture kaleidoscope.
2007年
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In
your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with an example/examples.
我的总体分析：这是一篇意义分析型作文，我采取的写作段落安排是：第一段描绘图片，引出主旨：自信。第二段，分析自信在生活中的积极意义。第三段是写怎样才能在活中实现它。
(学生习作)
This is an interesting picture full of instruction and it tells us the message: as long as there is enough self-confidence, we will achieve success. Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that the two unconfident men, who are playing football, image their opponent very powerful but regard themselves as the weak. It is a perfect example of people becoming the victim of the shortage of self-confidence. Materially and spiritually, we can easily recognize the significance of confidence in terms of achieving success. On the one hand, confidence is the key to success. Take the disabled athletes as an example. They were not conquered by the misfortunes but were full of self-confidence to conquer them. On the other hand, if people lose self-confidence, they are bound to fail in the end. Therefore, this picture reminds us positively how crucial confidence is in our daily life.
Considering all the points discussed above, it is advisable that we highly value self-confidence and apply it in our study and work. Life is fair and every one enjoys equal opportunities in their life. Therefore,
we should turn every possible opportunity into reality and strive for better life.
(对文章的语法错误已进行了修改) 点评: 对图的理解是对的，这是写自信对人生的影响的问题的，要如何正确对待世界和身边的优秀的人。
总体评价：作文写得不错， 语法错误少，表达比较清晰准确。
(修改后附讲评)
This is an interesting/vivid picture full of instruction/profound implications and it tells us how important confidence is in our life.(图片反映的是正确的人生观或者世界观缺失的问题,要学会提炼抽象出主题词). Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that the goal-keeper believes that the goal is too big for defense while the striker simply thinks that the goal-keeper is comparably too big for the relatively small goal!(为了突出效果,可以选用一些表达相对大小的字眼) It is a perfect example of the shortage of confidence bringing people unexpected
results and sometimes even failure.
//第二段是分析出现这样现象的原因，主要是激烈的竞争和不可预知的未来所导致的结果。
While I am looking at this cartoon, I can’t help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, I have found that not many people around me have confidence in themselves. The first and foremost goes to the influence of social competition and pressure upon us. We are forced to compete with talented people and strive for limited social resource such as jobs, opportunities and promotions. What’s more, people are not born wise or learnt and life is like sailing in a stormy sea. No one knows what will wait for us in the future and we have to struggle for better solutions to our questions or problems. No wonder more and more people are driven mad and become less confident about their life and even themselves.
//第三段，写”展望未来” 或者“解决方案”都可以，这也与第三点要求：give you comment.相符，同时也与第二段相呼应，给人以希望。展望未来的应该写一些重大政策及其意义，这样可以随便提一下解决方案。
（结束方案一）We are so lucky to live in such a period with civilized policy and rapid social development. With more and more people giving great attention to the mental health of young people and with the increasing efforts and care coming from the central government and our society to help younger generation strive for a rich and colorful life, I am so confident that more and more young people will enjoy a magnificent life confidently in the way that is unique to themselves. Remember we are born uniquely different and valuable.（一定要给人希望，在提及政策时，可以对政策的目的作说明，这样就可以提一下解决方案了）
//上面一段采用的是展望未来，下面一段是用解决方案的方法写的。 （结束方案二）Considering all the points discussed above, it is sensible that we take effective and efficient measures to resolve this problem. To begin with, the government is supposed to strengthen education helping younger generation build up their self-confidence and restore their healthy mental world. Furthermore, it is advisable that media and society enhance the public awareness of the importance of self-confidence. As far as we are concerned, we should take a positive outlook to understand the world. Only by such doings can we make our lives more meaningful.
2006年
有两幅图片，图1 把崇拜写在脸上；图2 花300元做“小贝头” 注：Beckham是英国足球明星
有两张照片，一张照片上有一位男士脸上写着足球明星的名字，另一张照片上有一个男子在理发，他要求理发师为他设计一个小贝克汉姆的发型。
Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should
1. describe the photos briefly,
2. interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3. give your point of view.
(学生习作)
This is an interesting/vivid picture full of instruction/profound implication and it tells us how serious the attitudes of what to pursue in life are. Obviously, we could tell from the above picture that one person signed the name of Beckham on his left face, while another spent as much as 300 Yuan for a hair style of Beckhan. It is a perfect example of people disregarding the values we must pursue.
//第二段是分析出现这样现象的原因
While I am looking at this cartoon, I can’t help losing in further thought and searching for answers to this phenomenon. To my sadness, not many people around me have an advisable outlook of pursuit. The first and foremost goes to the influence of foreign culture in our country in recent years. Young fellows are tracing fashion. What’s more, with the rapid development of society, people’s economic needs have largely been fulfilled and they don’t know where they should go next.
//第三段，我认为图片的应该是让我们提出一个解决这样现象的方案，写”展望未来”还不如写”解决方案”好，这也与第三点要求：give you comment.
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