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2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错
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假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换批改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a
dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The
water had come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock.
After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After
a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been
done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's
terribly! Especially when there was no water.
2.文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及修改词均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
This morning I was about to leave for school then suddenly I heard my name called． She was Mother． “ John, puts on more clothes, and you’ll catch cold． It is so cold outside．” “ I don’t think it is cold today,” I said impatiently, ran away before she could say a word． Seated in front of the classroom, I was listening to my teacher careful． However, it was not yet nine o’clock when it was started to snow． I began to shake with cold． After all, a thin jacket is poor protection of the cold weather． I caught a bad cold． If
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only I had followed Mother’s advices! 3.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school． I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel
like prisoner． I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet． The only thing I have to do it is studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply． There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．
Best wishes，
Li Ping
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文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky bird recovered soon. When it was time for the bird to fly away, they felt pity but were very delightful. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show
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respects for nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
5.短文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词; 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
I went to the wildlife park together with parents last Sunday. There
were lots of visitors who standing before the ticket window. We waited long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, but I had to walk home covering as much as 5 kilometers. 6.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\\），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．
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试卷答案
. On→In 2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been 4. after→until 5. the→a 6. tired→tiring 7. 去掉to 8. subject→subjects 9. 正确 10. terribly→ terrible 2.
leave for school then suddenly… She was Mother． …puts on more clothes… …and you’ll catch cold… …ran away before she… Seated in front of… …to my teacher careful． …when it was started to… …protection of the cold weather …followed Mother’s advices ! 3.
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school．I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel
grade uneasy
like∧prisoner．I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet．The only thing I have to do it is a
studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply．There’s a generation gap get
among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be
between so/and is
colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as
Why
then改成when She 改成It puts 改成put and 改成or
ran改成running或者前加and front 前加the careful 改成carefully 去掉was
of改成against或from advices改成advice
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