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2021届新高考8省3+1+2模式高三名校好题速递分项汇编(2)之书面表达--应用文写作(解析版)

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2021届新高考8省3+1+2模式高三名校好题速递分项汇编(2)

之书面表达--应用文写作

【湖北省黄冈市2021届高三9月月考】假定你是李华,你的美国的好友Jack想了解一下在2020年9月8日上午北京人民大会堂隆重举行的“全国抗击新冠肺炎疫情表彰大会”(the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic)的情况,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.表彰大会举行的时间及地点;

2.简要介绍受表彰的对象及奖项(钟南山-共和国勋章,张伯礼等-人民英雄); 3.表彰大会的意义及目的。

参考词汇:共和国勋章:the Medal of the Republic 人民英雄:People's Hero 注意:1.词数80左右:

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Jack,

Knowing that you are eager to know “the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic”, I’m more than honored to introduce you more about it.

Held at the Great Hall of the People in Beijing on Sep 8, 2020, the meeting was aimed to to commend role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic. During the meeting, Xi presented the Medal of the Republic to Zhong Nanshan, and the national honorary title \for their outstanding contributions to the country's fight against COVID-19. It’s the role models and their spirits of “putting people’s lives first” that protected us from the horrible virus and saved millions of lives. All Chinese show respect and worship to them and decide to learn from them to unite together to build better communities..

Pray the crisis will end as soon as possible. Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇应用文。文章主要写一封信介绍全国抗击新冠肺炎疫情表彰大会的相关情况。 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时,描述颁奖过程使用一般过去时。

结构:总分法

总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:

1.说明表彰大会举行的时间及地点;

2.简要介绍受表彰的对象及奖项(钟南山-共和国勋章,张伯礼等-人民英雄); 3.说明表彰大会的意义及目的。 第二步:列提纲(重点词组)

Be eager to;fight against;be more than honored to do sth.;aim to do;outstanding contributions;protect sb. from;the horrible virus;show respect and worship to sb.;decide to do sth.;learn from;as soon as possible 第三步:连词成句

1.Knowing that you are eager to know “the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic”, I’m more than honored to introduce you more about it.

2.Held at the Great Hall of the People in Beijing on Sep 8, 2020, the meeting was aimed to to commend role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic.

3.Xi presented the Medal of the Republic to Zhong Nanshan, and the national honorary title \Zhang Boli, Zhang Dingyu, Chen Wei for their outstanding contributions to the country's fight against COVID-19. 4.It’s the role models and their spirits of “putting people’s lives first” that protected us from the horrible virus and saved millions of lives.

5.All Chinese show respect and worship to them and decide to learn from them to unite together to build better communities..

6.Pray the crisis will end as soon as possible.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】

范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:Knowing that you are eager to know “the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic”, I’m more than honored to introduce you more about it.中that引导宾语从句。也使用了特殊句式,如:It’s the role models and their spirits of “putting people’s lives first” that protected us from the horrible virus and saved millions of lives.中使用了强调句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。 【2021届广东省珠海市高三上学期摸底】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以我最喜爱的一本书为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括: 1.该书简介; 2.喜爱的原因。 注意:

1.词数100左右; 2.短文题目已为你写好。

My Favourite Book

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My Favourite Book

Of all the books I have read, I love A Dream of the Red Mansions most.

It is my favorite not because it was written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist in Qing Dynasty. Rather, I deeply value the book and have read it over 10 times, firstly, for the moving love story between Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. Besides, if given enough patience and devotion, the novel will also reveal the rise and decline of a famous royal family to its readers. What I also enjoy about the book is its language and writing style of Cao Xueqin, which had a profound effect on the writers of his times and later generations.

All in all, A Dream of the Red Mansions has won my heart and I am convinced that it deserves yours too. 【解析】

2021届新高考8省3+1+2模式高三名校好题速递分项汇编(2)之书面表达--应用文写作(解析版)

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