团队旅游travel with a group 个人旅游travel alone
Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help, they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．
However, other students prefer to travel alone． That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What's more, it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
For me, I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．
【解析】这是一篇图表，要求谈谈自己对不同的旅游方式的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
6．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢? 请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（80字左右） 内容包含：1.遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。 2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。 3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。
4.你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。 参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
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【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
【解析】本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述，谈论有关交通安全的相关内容。实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充个人的观点。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。可能用到的词组：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。
7．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）写作。
Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （毕业）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included. 1. How your junior school life is. 2. Things/moments that you won’t forget. 3. The regrets in the three years. 4. Plans for your future. 5. A natural ending.
【答案】I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
【解析】学生们已经度过了三年的初中生活，在这三年里，一定有一些事是他们无法忘记的。这篇作文要求学生们介绍一下自己的初中生活。题目中列出了一些要点，如初中生活的感受、难忘的事情或时刻、后悔的事情、未来的计划，然后再加上一个自然的结尾。写作时，我们就可以利用这些要点来组织语言，充实文章的内容。通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，注意谓语动词形式的变化。另一个难点是英语表
达和汉语习惯是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句式整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型。可以多用简单句，如主谓宾结构、主系表结构等，点缀一些并列句和复合句或较高级的句型，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。合理安排文章结构，注意语句之间的衔接，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，要点全面，并且结构安排合理，层次清晰。短文首先介绍了自己对三年初中生活、老师以及同学们的感受；然后介绍了自己在这三年里后悔的事情；接下来是对未来的计划以及对老师和同学们的祝福。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，谓语动词形式变化准确，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中长短句结合，使文章富于变化，有节奏感。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future.等。
8．（·济宁市第八中学中考模拟）书面表达
假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习（exploring learning strategies），请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让更多的学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。 注意：1. 短文应包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：100词左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
过去 老师讲解知识点，学生听现在 老师提出问题，学生相互讨论，并学会与他人合作,从而找出解决问题的方法。 丰富多彩的课外活动，如：读自己课堂 讲，记笔记，没有足够的时间独立思考问题。 课后 做大量的作业。 喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查资料等。 个人 感受 …… Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. ________________________________________
【答案】Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by ourselves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on. In a word, now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。本文主要所用时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。仔细阅读内容提示，根据提示内容列好提纲。内容要包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥。字数在100词左右。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。根据要点列提纲： 自从学校开始开展研究性学习以来，我们的学习发生了很大的变化。过去，老师在课堂上不断地讲解语言要点。我们学生只是听并做了一些笔记。所以我们没有足够的时间独自思考问题。课后我们不得不做很多家庭作业。但是现在老师们先把问题展示给我们，然后我们成对或分组讨论一会儿。我们试图找出解决问题的方法，通过这些方法，我们学会了如何与他人合作学习。下课后，我们可以进行不同的活动。例如，我们可以阅读我们喜欢的书，去图书馆或者上网寻找有用的信息等等。 总之，现在我们是我们学习的主人，我们感到很高兴。 【点睛】
文中能很好的利用连词（In the past ，So, But now, then，In a word）使文章更紧凑，条理。特别注意了时态语态的正确运用（In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. / But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. t.），文中用到了复杂句式结构（We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others..）。学习中要牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。写作前列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。要养成检查的习惯，注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
9．（·安徽省蚌埠龙湖中学中考模拟）当前，我市各学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”为题，用英语写一篇约80个单词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
读书的益处 存在的现象 发出倡议 获取知识、开阔视野、使人快乐 听音乐、看电视、上网等占用了大部分业余时间 多读书，读经典好书。让读书成为我们生活的一部分。 要求：1.倡议书应包含所有要点；2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。
Growing up with Good books
My dear friend,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My Dear Friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life! Thank you! 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。而非谓语动词结构Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games.和Our study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
【英语】中考英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题(含答案)(4)
