第二讲句式要高级，句子要鲜活
句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会 使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变， 让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！
［策略1］特殊句式，风景独好
写作中，如果考生能够使用强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等特殊句式，不仅能彰显 考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。
1 .运用强调句
①（2024 太原模拟书面表达）With your generous help, I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible. f It is with your generous help that I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible. ②（2024 全国卷 n 书面表达）I believe hard work will pay off! f I do believe hard work will pay off! 2 .运用倒装句
（2024 全国卷 n 书面表达）The game is so significant that it is required that everyone should be present punctually. fSo significant is the game that it is required that everyone should be present punctually. 3 .运用虚拟语气
If you should accept my application, satisfaction.
fShould you accept my application, satisfaction.
4 .运用省略句
（2024 昆明高三摸底调研书面表达
）While we travel along the way, we can enjoy the
I would spare no effort to commit myself to your I would spare no effort to commit myself to your
beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.
fWhile travelling along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns. 5 . it
句型
①（2024 全国卷 I 书面表达）First of all, bear it in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness.（it 作形式宾语）
②（2024 江苏卷书面表达）It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.（it 作形 式主语）
［策略2］三大句式，编排巧妙
1. 增加亮点的定语从句
定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合 并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文 章增加亮点。
①（2024 全国卷 n 书面表达）Everyone is welcome to watch the film. It tells about the development of our school. f Everyone is welcome to watch the film, which tells about the development of our school
②（2017 浙江卷 6 月书面表达）We will go to the Spring Mountain and there we can have a climb.
fWe will go to the Spring Mountain, where we can have a climb .
③（2024 全国卷 n 书面表达）Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest. It will provide enough energy for you. f Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you . 2． 提升档次的名词性从句
名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表 达句式。
①（2024 全国卷 I 书面表达）I hold the firm belief that I am the very person for this job .（同
位语从句 ）
②（2024 全国卷 ID 书面表达）It is worth mentioning that our volleyball team won the championship twice in national middle school volleyball matches
.（主语从句 ）
③（2024 江苏卷书面表达）There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption .（同位语
从句
）
④（2017 北京卷书面表达）That' why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice（表语从句）. 3． 吸引眼球的状语从句
在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。
4． 2024 北京卷书面表达）Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.
5． 2024 江苏卷书面表达 whenever we go shopping .
6． 2017 全国卷 ID 书面表达）If you want to apply for membership, you are required to fill in the application form and send an email to pingpong @123. com.
7． 2024 全国卷 I 书面表达）When it comes to what I can do to help, I believe I can be an outstanding tour guide in terms of
Chinese painting explanation.
）Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings
［策略3］活用非谓，手法老到
1.运用非谓语动词整合简单句，提升表达档次。
写作时，考生可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行整合，使其成为较高级的表达。
①On the other hand, I will help set up the English Corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English. fOn the other hand, I will help set up the English Corner, providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English］ 现在
分词作状语 ）
② I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help.
f Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.（ 现在分词作状语 ） 2.运用非谓语动词简化复合句，使语言简练。
①When the airport is completed next year, it will help promote tourism in this area. fThe airport to be completed next year will help promote tourism in this area.（
不定式作定
语）
（2） Because I was amazed at how skillful they were, I determined to be just as good as them. fAmazed at how skillful they were, I determined to be just as good as them.（
过去分词作状
语）
［策略4］适时感叹，必要强调
① How happy I was to be one of the members in this warm family! This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory.
成为这个温暖大家庭的一员，我是多么高兴啊！这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。
②Not only did it get us close to nature and relieve us of the heavy schoolwork, but it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
这件事不仅使我们亲近自然，摆脱繁重的功课，而且增进了我们之间的友谊。多么美好 的时光啊！
③ How considerate of you to remember my birthday!
您真得很体贴，还记得我的生日。
［策略5］高级表达，佳作之道
1. As the saying goes... 常言道 .......................
Just as the saying goes ,“One tree doesn't make a forest.\
正如谚语所言：“独木难成林。”我们的成功是建立在与别人合作的基础上的。
2. It goes without saying that... 毋庸置疑 ............................ It goes without saying that nothing is more important than health.
毋庸置疑，没有什么比健康更重要。
3. There is no denying that... 不可否认 ............................
There is no denying that it was my teacher ’s encouragement and help that resulted in my steady progress.
不可否认，是老师的鼓励和帮助让我稳步前进。
4. It is a good idea to do sth.做 ......................... 是个好主意。
（2024 重庆调研书面表达）It is a good idea to travel with a good friend , which will reduce your travelling expenses.
与好朋友一起旅行是个好主意，这能减少旅行的费用。
5. It is a virtue and tradition for sb. to do sth.
做某事是某人的优良传统和美德。
（2024 河南六市联考书面表达 those in need.
）It is a virtue and tradition for us Chinese people to help
帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。
6. It is strongly recommended that...
强烈建议 ............
It is strongly recommended that the school should give students more free time to take part in sports activities.
强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间参加体育活动。
7. If I were... , I would…如果我是 ........................... 我会 ..........
（2024 海口调研书面表达 ）If I were you , I would make good use of my spare time to help him get rid of this bad habit step by step.
2024年浙江新高考英语二轮复习教师用书：专题五书面表达1层级一层级二2第二讲句式要高级句子要鲜活
