2024年高考英语热点内容专练八 书面表达热点话题类（二）

Dear friends，

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y yours， Li Hua

【参考范文】 Dear friends,

With the popularity of smartphones, many people have become phubbers, buried in playing their smartphones. Even a lot of high school students spend their weekends or holidays playing phone games, casting bad effects on them. On the one hand, being buried in playing smartphones will cause damage to people’s neck and eyes. On the other hand, it will distract them from study and even make them perform badly in the study. At last, it will cause people to be psychologically addicted to the smartphones.

Making a balance of our life is the key to solving the problem. First, we should spend more time with our family and friends. Second, we can do some meaningful activities to replace phone games, such as reading some books or having some outdoor exercises. Meanwhile, we should consciously avoid smartphones for entertainment. Don’t let the smartphones ruin our life; don’t be phubbers at weekends or holidays!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡议信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封倡议信；手机的盛行让很多人都成了低头一族，而不少中学生周末也沉浸在埋头玩手机之中，假如你是学生会的主席李华，打算倡议大家加入＂周末或假期不当低头族(phubber)＂活动，现请你写一封倡议信，在倡议信中请提出有效建议。要点如下：成为低头族的危害(提出3条左右)；周末不做低头族，可以进行哪些活动，请给出建议(提出3条左右)。人称使用第三人称，时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。

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the popularity of smartphonesspend time (in)doing第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：（手机的盛行），（花费时间做），playing smartphones（玩手机），be addicted to（对……上瘾）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【写作亮点】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如过去分词I With the popularity of smartphones, many people have become phubbers, buried in playing their

smartphones.；现在分词Even a lot of high school students spend their weekends or holidays playing phone games, casting bad effects on them.，On the one hand, being buried in playing smartphones will cause damage to people’s neck and eyes.，Making a balance of our life is the key to solving the problem.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，on the one hand, on the other hand, at last, first, second, meanwhile等过渡词的使用使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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(内蒙古赤峰二中2024-2024学年高三上学期第一次月考) 话题：科技创新 难度：★★ 建议用时：6分 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim对中国的＂新四大发明＂（共享单车、高铁、支付宝和网购）很感兴趣，特写信向你询问。请你给他回信，选一项发明进行介绍。 注意：1. 词数不少于100；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：共享单车 bike-sharing 高铁 high-speed rail 支付宝 Alipay 网购 online shopping Dear Jim,

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Li, Hua

【参考范文】

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In recent years, among Chinese technological innovations, four have earned a reputation as China’s ＂four great new inventions＂. They are high-speed railway, Alipay, bicycle-sharing, and online shopping, which have added great convenience to daily life. As for me, I choose to talk about online shopping because I believe it has made traditional stores nearly obsolete.

With easier access to the Internet and wider use of mobile payment, online shopping has gained much popularity. This has caused the public to form different consumption habits, me included, of course. I seldom shop at brick-and-mortar shops now. What I often purchase online is clothing and stationery. There are various items for me to choose from. The easy access to consumer reviews helps me make informed purchases. Also, shopping online helps me save time and money.

Online shopping is a phenomenon that almost everyone has experienced in his or her life; and the reality is that it will only become more popular in the future. Although there’s nothing quite like the convenience of shopping online, we should make sure our privacy and security are never at risk. 【写作思路】

按照题目要求，写一篇议论文。选择一项中国＂新四大发明＂并做简单介绍。 第一步：整理题目要点

①交代＂中国新四大发明＂的背景（整体的介绍）；②提出自己想要说明的对象（本文作者介绍的是网络购物）③说明网络购物对生活的影响；④并简述你对这件事的看法。 第二步：准备关键词

根据关键要点，确定关键词，Chinese technological innovations中国技术改革；earn a reputation as作为……make traditional stores nearly obsolete让传统商店几乎过时；brick-and-mortar shops实体店；the easy 赢得赞誉；

access to容易获得；privacy and security隐私和安全等。

第三步：确定文章使用的时态，说明事实，应用一般现在时或现在完成时。 第四步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意语法和词法的使用。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过度，使之自然通畅。根据文章要点可以将文章分为三段。 【写作亮点】

范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接谨慎自然，符合书信的要求，不乏亮点的表达。 主语从句：What I often purchase online is clothing and stationery.

定语从句：Online shopping is a phenomenon that almost everyone has experienced in his or her life;… 表语从句：the reality is that it will only become more popular in the future

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固定句型：there’s nothing quite like…

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