专题五 短文改错
第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误
[真题演练] Passage 1
(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)
When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
答案：
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【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了由一张照片引发的作者对高中时光的回忆。
71．解析：词法错误。realize“认识到，意识到”，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。 答案：去掉of
72．解析：句法错误。由in the past few years可知句子要用现在完成时。 答案：had改为have
73．解析：行文逻辑错误。not only...but also...“不仅……而且……”，连接并列成分。
答案：and改为but
74．解析：句法错误。被动语态的结构为“be＋及物动词的过去分词”，take的过去分词是taken。
答案：took改为taken
75．解析：句法错误。句子用了过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became。 答案：become改为became
76．解析：词法错误。picture在文中第一句已经出现过，故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this，表示“在这张照片中”。
答案：in后加this/the
77．解析：句法错误。things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。
答案：they改为that/which
78．解析：词法错误。形容词修饰名词kinds。 答案：difference改为different
79．解析：词法错误。the latest music albums“最新的音乐专辑”。latest“最近的，最新的”。
答案：late改为latest
80．解析：行文逻辑错误。句意：这张照片常常让我想起我高中时的快乐时光。此处是以作者的口吻写的“我的高中时光”。
答案：your改为my
Passage 2
(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
答案：
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【语篇解读】 本文主要讲述了作者的叔叔经营餐馆的成功之道。
71．解析：句法错误。close to后接宾语从句。I live缺少地点状语，故用where引导宾语从句。
答案：that→where
72．解析：行文逻辑错误。though与but不能用在同一个句子中。 答案：去掉but
73．解析：句法错误。文章通篇用一般现在时，故将had改为have。 答案：had→have
74．解析：词法错误。主语是the key，与表语构成同位关系，并非对主语的描述，故用名词。
答案：honest→honesty
75．解析：行文逻辑错误。fresh vegetables和high quality oil是并列关系，不是选择关系，故将or改为and。
答案：or→and
76．解析：句法错误。fresh vegetables and high quality oil与use是被动关系，故用被动语态。be used for被用于。
答案：using→used
77．解析：词法错误。dream of doing sth.“梦想做某事”，是固定搭配。 答案：dreams后加of
78．解析：词法错误。in a short period of time“在短时间内”，是固定短语。 答案：short前面的the改为a
79．解析：行文逻辑错误。由“My uncle is the owner of a restaurant...”可知，
2018高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误靶向训练
