英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
20．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）写作。
Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （毕业）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included. 1. How your junior school life is. 2. Things/moments that you won’t forget. 3. The regrets in the three years. 4. Plans for your future. 5. A natural ending.
【答案】I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
【解析】学生们已经度过了三年的初中生活，在这三年里，一定有一些事是他们无法忘记的。这篇作文要求学生们介绍一下自己的初中生活。题目中列出了一些要点，如初中生活的感受、难忘的事情或时刻、后悔的事情、未来的计划，然后再加上一个自然的结尾。写作时，我们就可以利用这些要点来组织语言，充实文章的内容。通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，注意谓语动词形式的变化。另一个难点是英语表达和汉语习惯是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句式整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型。可以多用简单句，如主谓宾结构、主系表结构等，点缀一些并列句和复合句或较高级的句型，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。合理安排文章结构，注意语句之间的衔接，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，要点全面，并且结构安排合理，层次清晰。短文首先介绍了自己对三年初中生活、老师以及同学们的感受；然后介绍了自己在这三年里后悔的事情；接下来是对未来的计划以及对老师和同学们的祝福。其次短文使用了
正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，谓语动词形式变化准确，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中长短句结合，使文章富于变化，有节奏感。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future.等。
【英语】初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)及解析
