_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.
If you are a sports fan, you can join in the basketball games. It can not only make you strong and healthy but also help you learn teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making is a good choice. Students get to know more about science and develop interest in it. If you want to practice your spoken English, you can’t miss the English speeches. It can improve your abilities as well. There is also an art festival. Those who are good at singing and dancing can take an active part in it. You can show your talents and become more confident.
In my opinion, taking part in those activities helps us reduce our stress of study and every student enjoys a colourful school life. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校在业余时间举办的各种各样的活动。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第二，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如there are……，If you are……，It can not only……，It can improve……，Those who are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们有各种活动可以选择，接下来介绍各种活动的内容，最后表达参加各种活动的意义。此处all kinds of, choose from, join in, be interested in, know more about, want to do sth, be good at, take an active part in, help sb do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
16．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。
◆有导游，不会迷路； 团队旅游 ◆不必自己找食宿 ◆结识朋友，互相帮助 ◆自由安排时间； 个人旅游 ◆选择自己喜欢的旅游景点； ◆学会照顾自己 你的想法 …… 注意事项：
1．文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节； 2．想法至少在两句以上；
3．词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：
团队旅游travel with a group 个人旅游travel alone
Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help, they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．
However, other students prefer to travel alone． That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What's more, it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
For me, I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．
【解析】这是一篇图表，要求谈谈自己对不同的旅游方式的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
17．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。
老师 在校 学生 作业 周末 其它活动 锻炼，电视 …… （至少发挥两点） 作业多．舍弃爱好 工作认真负责，充满爱心 愿望 …… （发挥一到两点） 要求：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥： 2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams. At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
18．（·北京中考模拟）善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为
主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待 他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。 提示词语： important, help, happy
提示问题： ● What do you think of being kind to others? ● What did you do? ● How do you feel?
Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德） of Chinese people. ______ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together, when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out. Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term, he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud. 【解析】 试题分析：
本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。文中正确使用时态（过去时）来描述过去的经历以进行表达，使用第一人称形式进行写作。但也要注意在总结自己的感受，谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。 写作亮点：
短文开始就引入话题；提出了善待别人是传统美德，借助动名词做主语（Being kind to others is…），之后介绍了一段自己的经历，表意清晰，中心明确，动词过去时使用正确。有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点，如：so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，丰富的短语交错使用，使得故事表达清晰具体，切合主题，主旨鲜明突出。
19．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息； 3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。
The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in
class.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.
I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us. 【解析】 【详解】
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用
【英语】初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)及解析
