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【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.
To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own. 【解析】 【分析】
本文是一篇话题作文。 【详解】
根据题干““苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。 第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。
根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。 这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。 第三部分：总结全文——我为自己感到骄傲。
10．（·辽宁中考模拟）现在手机是人们生活的必需品，在给我们提供便利的同时，也有很多负面作用。
很多人成了“手机控”。请你根据要求谈谈对自己的看法：
1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。 【答案】 Phones can help us communicate more easily and know about what's happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.
【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇开放性话题作文，针对很多人成了“手机控”这一现象，结合自己的亲身经历，谈一谈自己的观点。考生首先要阅读前面的提示去认真审题，确定出文章的中心，用一般现在时态来表达。要求从三个方面去完成写作：1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。需要自由发挥的地方较多，比如手机的正面作用可以写有利于我们的沟通与交流，通过上网了解世界上所发生的事情，手机的负面作用可以写手机对健康的危害，对学生学习的影响等等。最后总结并发出呼吁。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
11．（·北京中考模拟）（题文）假如你是李华，本周六与好友相约去北京植物园。你的美国网友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。请你向他发出邀请，告诉他去哪儿，做什么以及你的建议。
提示词语：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a picnic 提示问题：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there?
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What do you advise him to do?
【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a picnic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
【解析】试题分析：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。本题根据提示内容应该用一般现在时，邀请对方并给出建议，需使用表达邀请和用于提建议的相关短语和句式，注意长短搭配，并在行文中增加细节和过渡，使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析提示要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累和写作练习以外，还应该适当背诵一些类似的范文，
这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a picnic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，come back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.等多种从句和be going to结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。
12．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
每个人都有自己的梦想和理想，为了理想而努力可以成就一个人的事业。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。
要求：1.参考提内容，可适当发挥 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯， 书写工整
3. 文中不得出现任何真实（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to
be________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.I really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others.
To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for me.I am going to read a lot.There are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their works.What’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice. All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up. 【解析】 【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清
楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
13．（·山东中考模拟） 写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陈述自己的理由。 3. 提出至少2条建议。 【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾
结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
14．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟） Writing.
Thirty-year- old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80-120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points: 1. Some common forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. （At least two examples） 2. Some effects（影响） on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）
3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）
【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, is prevalent in secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide.
First, because students spend most of their time in school and it's the school's responsibility to protect them and stop any forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for it.Second, as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children. 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校的欺凌事件。 【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我经历过的欺凌事件的形式，接下来介绍学校欺凌事件对学生的影响，最后介绍解决欺凌事件的方法。此处as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
15．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨
(英语)中考英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧及经典题型及练习题(含答案)
