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如何写好议论文的例子
作者：姚惠娟
来源：《广东教育·高中》2011年第11期
举例论证是议论文写作的一个重要方法。有些作文题目要求一定要用自己或别人的经历来举例，如2009年深圳市的调研题（一），2009年广州市的毕业班综合测试题（二），2010年的广州一模以及今年2011的广州一模都是这样的类型。 一、举例论证中存在的问题和解决方法
从这些考试的作文情况来看，同学们在写这类作文时仍存在不少的问题，尤其是在举例子这一部分。一般写例子论证主要会出现两个问题。 问题1：例子不当。
所举例子不能证明要证明的观点，或不够典型，不能完全体现要说明的观点。 请看2011年广州一模一考生的作文：
Honesty plays an important role in friendship. Take my friend Jimmy for example. He was called the King of being late by us when we were in Senior 1. At that time, we always organized some activities on weekends such as going hiking and having a trip to relax and promote the friendship. However, we always had to wait for Jimmy for half an hour and the activities were always delayed. Finally, no one wanted to ask Jimmy to join, which made him sad and disappointed.
分析：这个例子是不妥当的，因为它没有体现观点中的“honesty”的要素，例子侧重的是“punctuality（守时）”这一品质的重要性。
解决方法：(1)首先明确需要举例证明的论点是什么；(2)寻找与论点有共同要素的例子；(3)确定例子；(4)开始动笔写例子。 问题2：例子冗长。
所举例子细节过多，篇幅过长，喧宾夺主。
2010年广州一模要求考生举例说明“Overparenting has negative effects on children.”以下是一考生的作文：
Take my friend Ted as an example. Born in a rich family, he has been looked after well by her parents. He once told us that he was grateful to his parents because of their taking good care of him. However, he said that was also the reason why he felt upset and unhappy. As a result, though he is 18
如何写好议论文的例子
