(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达专题训练答案及解析

（英语）九年级下册英语书面表达专题训练答案及解析

一、英语书面表达

1． 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示：

Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力） Take exercise… Advantages Problems Advice Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen… Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of… 注意：

1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；

3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）

In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议） 【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。 【点睛】

本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

2．书面表达

假如你是Amy，德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中，她询问如下信息：1．你家情况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担的家务劳动；4. …现在，你就她提出的问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！ 要求：1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3. 字数约110词。 Dear Sara，

I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________ Love， Amy

【答案】Dear Sara，

I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.

I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say \ As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.

Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes. Love, Amy 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而复杂并列结构In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel

uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．书面表达

假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。 写作要点：

1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。 2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：

（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。 （2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。 （3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。 3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。 写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.

___________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.

I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.

Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面表达

假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信 询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果： 1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕 4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、 参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾

词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．

_______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5．随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？ 2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？

3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？

要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.

Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.

In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.

【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6．书面表达

随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。 Your opinion Your reasons Your suggestion necessary or unnecessary the root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about, spread, develop … Dear editor,

As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mike

【答案】Dear editor,

As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.

First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students

chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture. All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes! Yours, Mike

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7． 诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。

请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下： 1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。 注意：

1、词数80—100； 2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours, Tony

【答案】The Importance of Promise Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours, Tony

【解析】 【分析】

本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。 【详解】

首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。 【点睛】

文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

8． 书面表达

暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

Parents' opinions Get ready for high school. Do some housework… Kid's opinions Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing… Your opinion … 注意]

（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;

（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息; （4）词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.

In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系． 【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

9． 书面表达

共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给《21世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。 社会现状 自从出现，饱受赞誉。 1.随处可见，出行方便 诸多优势 2.有益健康，减少污染 3.费用不高，负担得起 存在问题 你的观点 1.未及时归还 2.占道挡路 我认为……（考生自拟，至少2点） 注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。 3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.

Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.

I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《21世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help

reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。

10．共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。 社会现状 自从出现，饱受赞誉。 随处可见，出行方便 诸多优势 有益健康，减少污染 费用不高，负担得起 存在问题 你的观点 未及时归还 占道挡路 我认为------ 参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。 3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.

【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括4个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的

观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。